Not bad, but it has a very weird pacing and not having any text conversations doesn't make it easier to follow...

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has to be so ennuing having glowing bodyparts at all time. jeez

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Wonder if the children will be there own night lights. :3

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What you have to eat to have glowing bodyparts...

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Hi everyone, thanks for the feedback. :)

- About the glow parts, these were based on the references given to me on what to draw. I don't particularly think I did well on them as they had a lot of restrictions put in place, and I'm usually known for my cartoon style and 'easier' characters to be tasked with drawing. I don't remember whether adding text was discussed or not, but I remember it was being decided not to.

- All scripts I receive are drawn as it was written. Sometimes budget restraints get in the way of things, other times I just try to go ahead with what I'm given.

All in all, for what' it's worth, thanks again for the feedback. Much appreciated.

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So he's some kind of vampire? Neat.

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