This is the introductory volume of my first comic.
This is just the introductory part of the serie (Abduction), just to set the ambient and introduce the characters so is a little softcore preparing for the next part. I will appreciate your opinions! Thanks!

Great setup! Hope for more soon. We need to get those clothes out of the way quickly!

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You might want to get some help with the english. The actual dialogue is not good.

However, the artwork is great, and the overall story is too. Keep working on it!

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Good 3D, but that "Engrish" is bad. Try to get someone to help you with proofreading or perhaps translation from your original language to English. But by all means keep telling your story, don't let your lack of English stop your inner artist. Waiting for your next chapters.

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Hi, thank you for your comments, just a question as a little survey. Do you prefer the next volume in English (take in accoun the bad grammar) or is better in Spanish (my native language)?

Hi, new update with some corrections to the dialogs. Thank you!

Last edited on 20 May 2018, 16:13.

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I guess even Engrish is better than Spanish... because most of us can understand engrish and english,(actually I noticed nothing wrong until I saw comments pointing out some typo or grammar or whatsoever) but has to ask google for help to comprehend some spanish. After all, it's a little disappointing to see an excellent commic come with some typo, but it will be utterly frustrating if it has a spanish tag.

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Good start, looking forward to see her big tits be sucked!

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Can't wait to see the next one! Please upload it soon <3

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For RRapes. The my opinion is Great CG 3D But please in the next episode you can put scenes with double anal... gape... x-ray and ass to mouth. Thanks

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When will the Episode 2 be released?

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Hi actually i am working on it, soon it will be out!

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soon my ass lmfao

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A few centuries later...

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