Chapter 2 of 2 Girl Preyed Upon Monster. just like the previous Post, as an amateur Translator, i'm gonna translate in My Free Time due my College and Work, yes i Have a Life (a Good Life) so when i got some spare time and not busy, i'll translate this Manga indefinitely. but i'll do my best.

Please Note that i post my Translation on 9GAG first, before i upload it here

i present you the 2nd chapter from the Original Artist Sarugaso-Sensei (my Favorite Author)

Update 27-10-18 -> I add new one page, actually i already translated until page 9 and currently editing page 12, with the help and advice from fellow 9gaggers, i gonna upload the rest soon after retouch the rest, also page 2-3 revised, check it yourself.

Update 28-10-18 -> Added Page 7-9 thanks to 9gaggers for the help!

Update 04-11-18 -> Translation of Chapter 2 Finished, thanks to everyone. be sure to Buy the Manga and Support the Author

Update 05-11-18 -> rearrange some page also a note from me that indeed there is some addition that not included, mixing original+rewrite, so yeah i add [rewrite]

Looking forward to the rest :)

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Love_heaven Here. :)

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@nazelharry I've sent you a message on the e-hentai forums, i hope you see it!

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And this is why an lot of RPGs exclude the "taunt" command.

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Of course people will downvote when you say stupid shit. This is a guro comic... just because you don't like it does not mean you're allowed to cause an unjust expunge. The TL is concise and art is crisp. Do not cause unnecessary problems for the OP.

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This comic has such sights to show us...

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Is there a site for more comics from this author?

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I rated this low not because of the guro (because I know what I was getting into), but because the TL is a borderline rewrite, with a lot of stuff being misinterpreted and entire lines being made up and inserted. And that's not counting the unnecessary 'meme' pages.

@Chaos Dragon Apostle: No, the TL is not concise at all.

Last two lines on the final panel of the last page is just "(They say that) Nothing remains of Miss Amrit in this world, other than her beloved hat, a few scraps of flesh, and the bloodstain left on the floor".

Original:
「愛用の帽子と、少しの肉片、そして床に残った血痕以外は
アムリットさんの痕跡はこの世に何も残らなかったという」

(You can verify the above by asking somebody else who knows Japanese, or even by just plugging it into an machine translator.)

No "the teacher suspected of her absence" or whatever, no blood hat, no "blood hat", no "her family being erased", no wizard code, no nuthin'. It's ALL MADE UP FROM WHOLE CLOTH.

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A "translation" which is actually rewrite with old and tired memes. So this is the power of 9gag. Please stop, or at least learn how to actually translate before uploading anything else.

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Lol. This is obviously a troll translation.

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If you read the Original version and compare it to this version... i must say your editing Skill is impressive, the censor edited with even better version, thank you sirm your translation also Great and Funny despite the rewrite. i respect you.

no one says that a Copy can't surpass the Original - Emiya SHirou

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Cannot begin to thank you enough for translating this. Thank you thank you THANK YOU.

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This is NOT how you 'eat ass'.

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These meme pages are the worst I've ever seen. The TL is garbage as well. Holy shit.

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This translation is horrifically bad, what the fuck 9gag stop that you're not funny.

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