This is my current work.
I'm pretty new to drawing comic[manga] so quality may go up and down cause I tried many things. Sometime it looks better sometime worse but I'm going to do by best.

I'm looking for people that can do some text effect and better dialogue writer [as you can see, I'm not great at writing good dialogue]

If you think this is worth supporting, you can donate some money to my patreon page

https://www.patreon.com/Vertutame

And it would be great to suggest some idea, I'm not great at drawing manga either.

BTW, how to add tags?

If language English made this western, I will use japanese, seriously.

looks really good my dude

Base +9, jidt +6

actually it's read right from left so western.... isn't really a right tag here and I'm asian -_-

it's been a day after I uploaded this.
There's "0" Donation from this site.
You know that I have to eat right?

such a sad day indeed...

Don't worry I will end this manga[comic] and I won't draw next one cause it seems nobody give a damn about it.

Last edited on 08 December 2018, 11:49 UTC.

Base +7, tooshyforthis -5

your art is good, but not outstanding.. your story is so-so.. your sex play idea is nothing special.. even you acknowledge that yourself, so expect instant return on your art is quite high of a hope..

if your time is limited, and you aren't confident about your ideas, maybe you should try draw single pics or short (3-4 pages) stories? Try drawing some "niche" fetish of you (by other account if you don't want people to know) to see how people reach to that. I have seen many "bad" artist with weird ideas, and their name tag have 2 or 3 e-hentai page, so it seem people do buy it. Consider it as a hobby first to test the water and choose your style and hone it (people don't really subscribe so you can "try" thing out; they expect the same style that make they subscribe in the 1st place). If you can build a sizeable fanbase, then you can turn it into your part time or full time job; if not, then maybe you aren't suited for this kind of thing after all.

of course, the final decision is your.. but if you like drawing hentai and want to try, give it some more time..

Base +6, harbrun +19

@bunnygunny
Actually, it's not my idea, it's something my patreon asked me to draw it.
I'm not even Metal slug's fan.

I don't know how did you get idea of story when there's no text and
"Actual sex" isn't even here yet.
There're 35 pages but they're not finished yet.
I'm actually drawing this as practice
but still, I really love to get more people to support me, financially.

And
It's not western.
1.It's read right to left
and
2. I'm not living anywhere close to western
and
3. as you can see, I tried a lot of thing on many pages, some aren't great as this is my like 3rd manga using digital tablet.
And I think I can draw anything seriously unless it's Inoue that use brush style which I don't know how to do that
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=263071&type=manga
The most problem right now is I'm not good with screentone and effect "yet"
cause I'm not used to digital yet.

Last edited on 09 December 2018, 17:36 UTC.

Base +7