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[Ameshoo (Mikaduki Neko)] Rifujin Shoujo | Unreasonable Girl I [English] [GB_TRS]

[あめしょー (三日月ネコ)] 理不尽少女 [英訳]

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Posted:2020-09-18 23:07
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Language:English  TR
File Size:24.98 MiB
Length:8 pages
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Posted on 18 September 2020, 23:07 by:   GB_TRS    PM
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I've seen random parts of this series translated into English, but never the first two. It seemed odd to me, since they set up the story, so I decided to do something about this myself. It's my first ever tanslation, so be gentle, and I'll happily listen to some constructive criticism :)

Disclaimer: This work is entirely reliant on machine translations and dictionaries. I do not speak Japanese. My goal is merely to make the works I enjoy understandable to a non-Japanese speaker, even if the end product deviates somewhat from a "true" translation. With that in mind, I hope my effort has made your time a little more enjoyable as well, and if you'd like to see more, I highly encourage that you support the artist by purchasing the original work.

Support the artist by purchasing their work: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ112261.html
Posted on 19 September 2020, 00:55 by:   Fallen_Prince    PM
Score +67
I've been hungry to have every part of this translated for years now, please keep up the good work. Thank you so much
Posted on 19 September 2020, 13:50 by:   gweh    PM
Score +33
Same re: the rest always bugging me; of what I've seen, part 7 w/mtf + ftm is still the best, but really appreciate getting the chance to check out the others. Thanks mate!
Posted on 19 September 2020, 16:03 by:   Bananas1986    PM
Score +18
You are a saint, I've been yearning to get more of this series translated for ages!
Posted on 19 September 2020, 21:58 by:   Antfl    PM
Score +9
Absolute mad man, thank you my dude
Posted on 20 September 2020, 01:17 by:   Lao Shan Long    PM
Score +7
About time we see more of this get translated. You're doin' the lord's work here, anon.
Posted on 20 September 2020, 07:11 by:   dralemeres    PM
Score +6
The speed at which this plot develops makes me ask "are you sure you didn't translate a random part yourself?"

Genderbender? Sure. They might not show the set up, but they start by referencing this fairly traditional plot. But then, Za Warudo? Why the time stop? Where this this person get this power? Since this body switch, was it even her/his power, or did she/he steal it with the body swap? And my twisted pronouns also brings up the issue of 'who si the unreasonable girl?'- the former girl (who is doing super power based plots), or the current girl (since that is the only character in this that we get to ssee with a female body).

It forces me to ask questions. Which is a problem. The typical ideal is to get things to make enough sense that we can hand waive them and enjoy the scenario. Instead, I am just using that hand to scratch my head.
Posted on 20 September 2020, 07:41 by:   Scarlet99    PM
Score +18
@dralemerea
Ah, I see that you're a man of culture that enjoys plot in these doujins as well
Posted on 20 September 2020, 08:04 by:   Yuki Makoto    PM
Score +8
@dralemeres I'm pretty sure the unreasonable girl is the one in the guy's body. In the raws, it's implied she used her powers to swap bodies with the guy which would suggest her powers belong to her and stay with her even if she changes bodies.
Posted on 20 September 2020, 10:01 by:   GB_TRS    PM
Score +8
@dralemeres
I agree that, for the entry that's meant to establish the whole premise of the series, this one is very short and has lots of stuff thrown into it without a great deal of explanation. The way I think about it is that her powers stay with her consciousness, rather than her body. That's why she can swap bodies and make others look like her and all that stuff without them gaining powers and without her losing powers. In part 2 it's more or less established that her powers are just a plot convenience, that she can do anything she wants because otherwise the comics would get nowhere. As far as the goal of the comic is concerned, the source of her powers is irrelevant. Mikaduki Neko has this tendency to make very simplistic plots with bare minimum required to get to the sex, as I've judged from reading most of his works.

To summarise this entry, a girl (the unreasonable girl) discovers that she's omnipotent. One day, while at school, she swaps bodies with a classmate, and it's shortly after that that the comic itself begins. She uses her new body as well as her powers to toy with the boy in her body, making him cum on command, among other things. It's implied that, between pages 3 and 4, the girl in the boy's body stopped time and had sex several times, as indicated by the cum all over the girls' body, but she didn't find it as fun because not seeing reactions and having no opposition is not fun to her, so she resumes time and has sex one more time, which is what's depicted in pages 4-8.

It would've been awesome if I'd been able to convey all of that in the translation, but the space was limited so I had to make do with what I had.
Posted on 20 September 2020, 19:40 by:   Jay Low    PM
Score +17
Thank you very much kind sir.
Posted on 04 October 2020, 17:42 by:   Tomzai    PM
Score +6
Wasn't there still a part before this one? I'm fairly sure there was a part before they swapped.
Posted on 04 October 2020, 20:00 by:   GB_TRS    PM
Score +17
@Tomzai

This is the earliest release from the artist with the title 理不尽少女 (Unreasonable Girl). There was another series released before this one, called 女の子に憑依する本 ラスト (Girl Possession Book), but I'm not too familiar with it, and it doesn't seem to be related to this one as far as characters go. The only thing that relates them is 理不尽少女 ~タイムリープセックス~ (Rifujin Shoujo ~Time Leap Sex~), where the MC of Girl Possession Book is toyed with by the MC of Unreasonable Girl. However, it was released in July 2017, four years after this chapter of Unreasonable Girl. Prior to these two works, the artist has only released works based on the Touhou Project. So yeah, there really is nothing before this part.
Posted on 03 November 2020, 09:54 by:   b911    PM
Score +7
Thanks for the translation. I normally don't like machine translations since it discourages an actual translation later on, but I think anything a few years old is fair game, and this one had decent effort put in.

Question: you say that "her powers stay with her consciousness, rather than her body," but someone said the exact opposite in the comments in /g/682199/28a0c16d83/:
"Chapter 1 is about the guy has some sort of godlike power letting him control the girl, but at the very end he wishes to switch bodies. Chapter 2 its revealed the power is linked to his body which he gave the girl, she changes it though to look like herself except she keeps his penis to rape him."

Any Japanese speakers know which one is the correct translation?
Posted on 14 November 2020, 00:08 by:   GB_TRS    PM
Score +2
@b911
Well then... your message encouraged me to look over the text again, and looking at what's being said at the beginning here, it really does fit the description you've given a lot better than what I'd cooked up. Which is a little embarrassing, considering how long this has been up, and I can't edit the gallery with a more accurate version without cloning it, so... not sure what to do about it now.

Still, regarding the power transfer, it seems like in this chapter the powers do get transferred from the guy to the girl through the body swap, and in most of the chapters afterwards the girl never gives her body away, but chapters 12, 13 and 14 do have fairly clear body swap, so I guess the writer just didn't bother with continuity...?

It also makes @Tomzai correct. There really was a part before they swapped, and this is the part.

The joys of a machine translation lol

#EDIT
Alright, so I took a good look at all the dialogue again and indeed it seems like at first the guy's just messing with her, abusing his powers, but then they swap bodies and that's when the girl, in his body, gains the powers. The body swap happens from page 6 onwards, but I can't for the life of me figure out why it happens.

I had the raw files, the will and all the skills needed except knowing Japanese. I hoped I could get by without it, but it seems like I overestimated what machine translation is capable of. I will look for someone who knows Japanese and collaborate with them to fix all the errors and upload a corrected version once it's done. Thank you for letting me know of this problem, @b911
Last edited on 14 November 2020, 15:20.

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