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--Sudden Body Swap in the bibliothek~
I made this short project for one of my current Tier 4 supporters as a test.
1 short project like this every month might become a new reward for tier 4 supporters.
I'm not that good with manga/comic layouts, so please give some feedback~

You wanted feedback? Here are a few suggestions:

1. The first page jumps into the story without any background whatsoever. It might be a better idea to start the story first with her looking for the book. Then, when she finds it, let the readers know what the book is about by either showing the title or having her explain briefly what the book is supposed to do.

2. Based on the second page, the two main characters bumped into each other, and the book activated when it dropped to the ground. However, the last two panels of the first page make it appear that the book activated as they approached each other. Put in a couple of additional panels of them bumping into each other, and the book dropping to the ground in order to make it less confusing.

3. You may want to use the girl's green speech font for her swapped boy body, and the boy's blue speech font for his girl body to make it even more clear that they swapped places.

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