Original translation.

Let me be clear. I did NOT translate this, this is the english version as offered by the original author/circle.

I've created a bounty for hopefully a decent TL.

You're welcome to chip in and add Credit or Hath to the bounty
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That's... a rough translation, buddy.

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olddog51 is that you?

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Will read when it gets better translation cause it is hurting me to try at this second.

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This would be amazing....if the translation wasn't so bad.....not quite Laruffi level, but still.

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"The translation can't be that bad"

*skips to page 37 and counts about 5 or more grammar mistakes on just that page*

"So hey I wonder when this will be translated"

*to not be mean to OP, this definitely needs like a proofreader or something. It's hard to tell how much is poor translation and how much is mixing up words. "I may have made a terrible choice in the momentum" kinda makes sense, but unless he meant specifically "I was going fast" and not "at that time", usually it's "terrible choice in that moment" or something, I don't know what the original said so I'm not sure what the original author meant but this needs a second glance at least.

*edit: OP says that this is from the author/circle and that they didn't translate, if so my point still stands but either way whoever wrote this version needed a proofreader

Last edited on 27 December 2020, 14:25.

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Anon's bird bride amirite?

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Why the hell EVERY comic lik this has to end with some girl pregnant!? Why? This is so annoying. Almost ruins while story to me. Still I am glad to see more Sumi.

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Not only is the grammar terrible, the faces seem pretty wonky, too. I wish we had better (And more) Yoshizawa doujin, especially in English. I'd love to see Joker dick her down in her Violet outfit. I mean, dat leotard, y'know what I mean?

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Rough grammar
p4 how don't have -> how you don't
I will do -> okay
p5 watches too -> watches porn too
watched a porn -> watches porn
really don't know -> you really don't know
p6 soon afterwards -> soon
p7 I say -> I said
why does -> what does
don't know -> you don't know
does mean -> it means
p8 characters introduction -> character's introduction
she had -> she has
heard appetite -> heard her appetite

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