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Translation by Orbit Translate and typeset by Eeliejun!

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Chinese version at /g/1618899/8fba26df72/

Huh this is actually pretty good. Ryona aspects aside, the other Exu doujins by this author were kind of OOC but this one's setup seems very reasonable.

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And with this the only Arknights artist is completely over. Now there are only tears left.

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Rare to see ryona that isn't uncomfortable, this feels more like really rough bondage play. I kinda like it.

Also, typo on page 6. Thank you.

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Not bad, but there are some typos and some confusing lines like

Page 3:

"there's traces of Texas' scent on you when she's in heat"

Is the meaning

1. "When Texas goes into heat, I can smell her on you"

2. "Right now on you, I can smell traces of Texas in heat" or alternatively "Right now on you, I can smell traces of Texas' pheromones"

I'm assuming 2.

BTW, does anyone know what happened to the artist?

Last edited on 18 February 2021, 05:59.

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Why there's so few arknights dojins compared to other gacha games. It's not like arknights is some small obscure game. Even less popular games get more attention

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Pretty good art, rather poor translation, at least when it comes to spelling. Things I marked with (?) indicate things I'm not 100% sure about myself.

Page 2: anyone who stall->anyone who stalls
I'm just wasn't->I just wasn't

Page 3: clingy to me->clingy with me
recently right->recently, right

Page 4: your body being used as->you as

Page 5: beg me to stop->beg for me to stop
I never done->I've never done

Page 6: it's cold and hard->they're cold and hard(?)
remtember->remember

Page 7: you'll do something->you'd do something
like this despite->like this, despite

Page 8: you now, are->you now are
Two bubbles in the last panel seem repetitive.

Page 10: you just clamp down on me from that->just from that, you clamped down on me

Page 13: my dick right->my dick, right
Taxes isn't it.->Texas, isn't it?
all high and mighty->high and mighty
like this just by->like this, just by

Page 17: jealous you know->jealous, you know

Page 18: you have a good eye on this one->you had a good eye for this one(?)
Able to pick->To pick

Page 20: good doesn't it->good, doesn't it
sperm you got that->sperm, you got that

Page 21: amazing isn't it.->amazing, isn't it?
good doesn't it->good, doesn't it
filed up->filled up

Page 22: really fun->real fun(?)
I'll see you next time then->Then I'll see you next time(?)

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@A0_
Idk about this time but the author always got a lot of hate from some arknights fans in the past... IIRC they closed their account/deleted content multiple times in the past and aren't happy about re-uploads to forums or eh.
Let's just say that.... Ryona tends to be a rather divisive fetish... and anything OOC tends to also be divisive... So an artist that does both but has an otherwise attractive art style will tend to get some rather unpleasant responses

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Raping a girl with knives stabbed through her hands to stop her from moving: ok
Swear words: not ok

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lol @ "it's the same as getting fucked by taxes"

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Greeting, this is the translator Orbit speaking. First of all, I want to thank all of you for your suggestions and helpful criticisms of my translations. Since I'm still rather new to English and translation as a whole, so any and all advice does help me significantly. Secondly, this is mostly due to my inexperience, but this one, in particular, has a lot of Chinese sayings/expressions that don't have a "pretty" translation to English, but those are just excuses. In any case, I'll be sure to keep those careless mistakes in mind and not repeat them for my future TLs. That's all I want to say so, take care everyone.

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don't know what arknights is but this artist is pretty decent !

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This was a really good story. It makes me wonder if the artist's other Arknights works tie into this one or if they are completely separate. I look forward to finding out but either way this has been a nice introduction to the artist's works.

Thank you for the translation and everyone that brought this work to us.

Art 7. Plot 8. Sexiness 8. Translation 7. All out of 10.

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@A0_ I think its meant to be "there's traces of Texas' scent on you from her being in heat"

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