Translated from "english" to English. Minor rewrites for clarity and style.

Previous attempt at English TR: /g/1812987/4b422f9ff0/
Raw /g/1813818/503be4de68/
Korean TR: /g/1837586/a77e7f4a3f/

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I remember this part of the Venom movie

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大佬牛逼

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You mean an edit, not a rewrite, right? "Rewrite" on this site refers specifically to when people make up a story without regard for the original text, so if you label it as that people might misunderstand.

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To add. Nigh everyone in the site hates rewrites.

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@BZFS @Amphion

Honestly, I write comics and even I don't see a problem with rewrites, as long as the rewriter is up front about it.

It's weird, sure, but not everyone has the money or art talent to make a comic for themselves. ¯_(ツ)_/¯

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So this is a cleanup from the previous machine translation, not a rewrite, right?

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Looks like you swapped the text around in the two dialog boxes at the top of page 13.
Even the edit/cleanup/rewrite isn't error free! Oh well, still much better than the original text.

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My bad, it's an edit. I didn't know the distinction.

Also, no, page 13 is just drawn with the bubble pointing at the wrong person, far as I can tell.

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Part 01: /g/1868524/df9df27852/ (you are here)
Part 02: /g/1926914/c25ae423e2/
Part 03: /g/2927005/587bebc65d/

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