Hello. I am learning English, so the writing may not be the best. I had fun translating this into English; there are so many sentences you can make. I completed this for myself earlier, but I saw the original was posted here. I made an account to post it! Please tell me what you think.

Please buy the original and all of Bourne san's other works or there will be trouble! Bourne san is good! I hope you like it! 🙇‍♂️

Would female:snuff apply here? She gets back up in the epilogue bit.

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Thanks for the translation! I wouldn't know about any potential inaccuracies, but I can definitely say that it reads well.

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It's great! We need more translated doujinshi with nice art style & good plot :>

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It doesn't matter as long it will become good plot and it had decent translation. Not some translation that will just confused the reader. Great job

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@ sanpuupu nice job !
does the artist have a website/pixiv/patreon ?

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@lauradorva
https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/89510805

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I like the intense internal dialogue the protagonist is having. The art and depiction of the asphyxiation is great as well.

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Well, that ending sure got awkward.

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Nice translation! I often wondered what they were saying
Wish more of his work was translated.

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The translation is cool, keep up the good work

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Thankyou for the translation, I hope you will translate more of his works.

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he's literally me

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