Nice. I like the little garbage creature having such an upperhand.

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Why i figuring the author of this comic had a very bad game VS a toxic Fiora, being stomped and now taking his revenge with this?

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Better if the art wasn't so bad

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hmmm i can't reply, for the messages in a reply form, so i reply them as a comment.

Meowshi:
Little garbage creature :D Kled is commin for ya!

Derasit:
:D There is no concrete game behind it, i just generaly hate Fiora, her gamedesigne, her playstyle, her playerbase, she just deserves the worst, while she still a pretty fuckeable chick, and i am willing to give that worst to her.

GuroLover12:
So you dont like the art, I know that i am not some high end artist also i believ that i am not some low end one too, i am somewhere in the middle, and actualy if you have some constructive criticism, i am happy to hear it. So what do you exactly mean by so bad? Hovever keep in mind that, i do not really have a lot of time to draw it, and i really want to progress with it, since i alredy have like 4-5 projects, wich ones i alredy want to work on.

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I don't know why you would even bother responding to GuroLover's ignorant post. I mean.. sure there's room for improvement in your art, but I think that will come with time and practice. I think some of the spelling and grammar could be better as well, but I'm guessing that English isn't your first language, and honestly, it's not like that's really that important for a guro porn comic anyway lol. Just take your time, and make the best work you can make. Keep it up :)

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Thanks Rachel

Last edited on 14 May 2021, 08:32.

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Spelling and grammar matter. Posing and anatomy matter. You're already pushing content that aims to disturb and disgust through gore and rape, so any other obvious flaws are going to be amplified a thousandfold by the type of story you're telling. If you picked tame fetishes you could get away with a 2.5-star average and just be largely ignored while you practice your techncial skills, but when you deliberately focus on kinks with maximum shock value, you have to nail the technical elements or you'll just catch hate from the folks who don't like the kinks for the kinks themselves and catch hate from the people who do like the kinks for the poor execution.

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Don't worry about the people hating on you. I like the comic and I am sure your artstyle will improve over time (I don't think it is that bad anyway)

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Well... when you think about the constant death and respawning. I'm not shocked this wasn't a subject before.

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This is disgusting and revolting

I want to see more

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劲有点大啊。看完生理不适

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