My first attempt in translation. Made this chapter in one go so there might be mistakes.
Any feedback? Wishes?

I thought the series is still translated by @フラカノ? Hijacking is never nice. And I got a bad feeling when I saw your username.
Btw the guy's name is Naruse Soushi, not Aoshi. That was from first chapter.
Others' names are not consistent. Like in P3, Lapidus (wrong!!) Rufus, then Ravis, then Lapis.
P7: Tousand? Kokoro's Special Hospitality? 心よりのおもてなし ?
Maybe there's more, I'm too sleepy to check.

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"Hijacking is never nice"
Shut your pie hole will you? While the other points are true, there are mistakes here and there, nothing should be in the way of a creative process. If someone wants to translate something, regardless of if they were paid for it or for fun, just do your best to help them weed out those errors so they get better at it.

Please keep at it gugeru_transuletaa. It might not be perfect, but it is a good translation regardless.

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Yeah, I should've gone to bed and check for mistakes the next day. Galleries cannot be updated here, right?
The mistakes a terrible! :D And that Kokoro part....well, it was so late and I confused it with another manga I was translating.

I'm not sure about that Hijacking point. Also, there's money involved!? I did it just for fun (even thou it was more like work :D).

Translation errors and typos aside, randomly translating a chapter seems to be a no-go? :D
Is there like forum for this? I don't intend to piss-off people. Maybe I'll translate something where there is no translation at all.
Maybe some senno knife stuff.

Maybe I'll make my own "manga" or a video-game! :D

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@shadowthegamer
If someone else is already translating something, you should leave it to them. It's never good to intrude on someone else's work, but more importantly, why work on something someone else is already doing in the first place? That's wasted effort that could've been used to get other manga translated. Of course that's assuming none of the translators knew or it's a bad translation or something then in which case go nuts. Since it's their first translation I'll give them the benefit of the doubt and say they didn't know. A manga only needs one solid translation. I'm sure if this translator were to work on something else they liked it wouldn't get in the way of their "creative process."

@gugeru_transuletaa
In this particular case, if you checked this artist's tag, you could assume someone else was translating this series since they've already translated the previous 4 chapters. You're editing is good, just need to work on your translations and be more aware next time.

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first, i believe the term is "sniping", not hijacking.
second, while it's free for anyone to translate anything they want, it's common courtesy to check if anyone else had been working on the same thing simply by using the search function.
it's better to do something no one is working on, but if you really want to work on the same thing you can contact the other party to discuss that.
third, galleries can be updated. check the wiki on how to do it. if memory serves it got something to do with cloning.
last but not least, by whatever gods are there i hope that you don't use MTL.
cheers!

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@ gugeru_transuletaa
Galleries can be updated. To update a gallery click on "My Uploads" , find the gallery you want to update and click on "Manage" at that gallery and then "Clone and UnLock". Now you have an editable copy of your gallery where can add new images, remove unwanted and reorder the images. When finished publish as usual.

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All translation efforts are appreciated but since there is already someone translating this manga you should look for some of the other works of this author that are yet to be translated. Or why not cooperate with the other person to expedite the work and cross-reference your translations.

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