Excellent work, great translation - thanks for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of this great artist, as well as works that have not been translated

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grammar mistakes and other translating weirdness

pg. 11
harry up -> hurry up

pg. 12
tightening your pussy -> tighten your pussy
Your pant voice is good -> your panting voice is good
i had be a virgin -> i had been a virgin
but why so good -> but why is it so good
this is girl's joy -> this is a girl's joy

pg. 13
don't cum inside i have a child -> don't cum inside i'll have a child

pg. 14
i just come many times -> i just came many times
but i touch your point (i don't know. it's not technically wrong grammatically, but it just sounds bad)

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