Too far Too Close - Chapter 1

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Posted:	2021-12-09 03:54
Parent:	None
Visible:	Yes
Language:	English
File Size:	115.9 MiB
Length:	19 pages
Favorited:	32 times

Rating:		18
Average: 3.71

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Posted on 09 December 2021, 03:54 by: Not_ilustre_Gui

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I made this comic with the intention of having fun while drawing degeneracy. Hope you like it.

Posted on 09 December 2021, 05:33 by: 2764136737

Great work. 5 stars.

Posted on 14 December 2021, 21:25 by: anon102938

Great stuff dude! Your motion lines and positions are great, but keep your facial anatomy in mind. Page:panel 6:1, 6:3, 8:1 and 15:2 could use some tweaks, as the position of features shift around a bit. Good dialogue and tension as well. Lastly. don't forget to tag your gallery!

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language:	english
male:	netorare sole male
female:	ahegao nakadashi x-ray
other:	comic