My first translation... Made a few changes in the text to sound more natural in english...
Also made a small change in the last panel, thinning the pee stream a little, felt more natural that way, not a big deal anyway

"Thank you for confessing to me sooner"

Well, one bubble in and I already know what to expect from the rest of this translation.

"Also made a small change in the last panel, thinning the pee stream a little, felt more natural that way, not a big deal anyway"
And rice balls being replaced by jelly donuts in anime isn't a big deal either, right?
Your job as a translator is not to edit the content or meaning; It is to translate. Save those kinds of edits for yourself or include them as alts.

Mind linking to the original, at least, since you clearly have no qualms about changing content? I appreciate that you at least let us know, but come on.

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Thanks for the almost constructive criticism

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You'll find the work somewhere in this gallery

I'll follow your advice and keep it to myself

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I mean I would rather have a slightly inaccurate translation than none at all as an English only speaker, cut the guy some slack holy moly.

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