Author > etori.fanbox.cc
i'm a newbie starting to TL doujins (specially femboy/trap/sissy) if you want to help or team up send me a message and we can chat on discord

Don't forget to add at least the yaoi tag after uploading such kind of work. kthx

(but nice to see an translator anyway, so welcome)

B-But there are several speech bubbles untranslated. Same with text outside of bubbles. Page 4 is even completely untranslated. Just saying!

raw: /g/2126064/8895682577/

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Half this shit is untranslated. I'm not even sure it can be tagged as "English."

rough tl

All the below dialogue is untranslated.

p.1 ここで [...]
p.1 それに [...]
p.1 これが [...]
p.2 うわぁ・・・なにこれ・・・
p.2 そう・・・なんだ・・・
p.3 こ・・・こんな [...]
p.3 エッチって [...]
p.4 ズポズポ [...]
p.4 おちんちん [...]
p.4 こっちの方が [...]

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You'll get an better reception if you've waited until you finished translating stuff before posting it on here.

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Great power-bottom stuff

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I need more of this

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To add to cutegyaru's comment (since the errors on page 4 don't count)

p1
JP: いつもこんな所つかうんだ…
EN: So this is the place you usually use...
OP: I-Its fine I always come here...
Justification: Completely wrong.

p2
JP: ヤリまくってるくせに中々じゃ…
EN: Pretty amazing for a whore's fuckhole...!
OP: This is the best...
Justification: The literal translation here is "Even though he fucks like crazy, isn't this..." so no, OP left a whole lot out.

JP: 出したら舐めとる？
EN: I gotta lick out my cum?
OP: If I pull it out, I should clean it?
Justification: 出る is used to refer to ejaculate, whereas 抜く would be 'pull out'. So no, this is still wrong.

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