1. Wrong res. You used the 1280x version of the images. Original is 1390 x 2024. You need to dl the archive or the non-downsized torrent. Or even just click the image, scroll down, and click "Download Original." 2. Lots of untranslated text. p.6, 11, 17, 20. Text that also needs to be removed. I know redrawing is annoying, but you can't just leave it in and add the TL in a margin lmao 3. Some guides.
General resources: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/ Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/ Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630