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This is the finale of "only you", a story made by Fumi Miyabi (Bunga).
Hope you enjoy!

Credits
Artist: Fumi Miyabi
Twitter: https://twitter.com/bun_gagaga
pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/1383128
BOOTH: https://jdworld.booth.pm/

Translated and typesetted by me

Open commission!
If you have something that want to be translated from JP to EN, you can contact me in the following contact list below.
Twitter: @yozorakawaki
E-mail: [email protected]

so cute...
only if she didn't have that mole under her left eye. that is cheating mole in hentai.

@Reach:

author is jp,
japaneses & chinese & korean (country effect by china culture) care a lot about mark on body.

female with mole under left eyes is generally as lucky mole for material need (doesn't have to worry about money) but have problem with love life.

that is why cheating story female character with that mole didn't get found out by boyfriend/husband or if discovered they get away with cheating.

most in the role of rich woman didn't satisfy with her official partner so she cheat.
or the woman has money but she can't get the man she loves cause he has lover so she have to get other guy.

female with mole under left mouth corner, slut, lewd, ready to fuck whoever she want.

female with mole on her pussy, max lewd, ready to do all kind of sex.

mole on inner thing, crotch sensitive

that is why jp author put mole on character, it is not just "beauty mark" it is to general character role.

a clean body character can take any role, but reader would not know what that character role is when look at, with mole reader can get the general idea from author role for that character.

of course this is for reader (jp, china, korea, part sea) that known what mole means, reader (western) without mole meaning knowledge would just pass it as dot on body.

Last edited on 09 September 2022, 04:14.

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>cheating mole
what

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Have you even read what you're putting into the text bubbles?
Not only does it not make sense, your grammar and general level of English is terrible.

Also the fact you translated 犯す to literally mean rape shows me that you don't understand Japanese either.
On page 26 you translated
あ あいを毎日犯すよ as
"Sure enough, I will rape you everyday"
when it should've been
"A-Ai, I'll have sex with you every day then!"

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I will only point out the grammatical mistakes and awkward sentences.

p2. What makes you come here bringing me food again today? (Awkward English, also, wrong verb tense)
p3. I remembered about what you did yesterday -> I remembered what you did yesterday
p4. By the time I realize it... (Use the correct verb tense)
p5. I do my hair... (Again, use the correct verb tense)
p5. And then the shop person chose my underwear for me. (Shop person? There's gotta be a better word for this. Also this has the correct verb tense.)
p6. Are you insecure about what I said yesterday? (Use the correct verb tense)
p6. Did I... turned you on? (Use the correct verb tense)
p6. Will you, rape me once again? (The comma is not needed. Use an ellipsis instead, and I bet the Japanese raws use it too.)
p7. I can't get enough doing it by myself (Awkward English)
p8. More, stir me up (Same as "Will you, rape me once again?")
p11. I want it even more every time I came (Use the correct verb tense)
p18. Then make sure to fill it up so it won't overflow <3 (But that means it'll still overflow, right?)
p18. This little!! (Grammatically incorrect)
p21. Now I have to do the washing tomorrow. (Awkward English)
p23. Why you dressed like that? (Grammatical error)
p26. ...masturbating three times "in" school... (please use the correct preposition)
p26. Are you being pent up? (Grammatically incorrect)
p26. It's cheaper than your prostitution, right?! (So the guy is a prostitute?)
p28. You proposed me? (Grammatically incorrect)

My suggestion: get a better proofreader.

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@Kyuume
Of course i read it, i do all the work by myself after all.
And I just want to mention that I am more familiar with Japanese than English, thus I am more capable of choosing and understanding words in the perspective languages.

Regarding the correction, I'm aware about your point and did choose the word "犯す" to be "rape" instead of "sex" after considering the relation between the two of them that goes from the beginning until now.
In Ch.1 -> Ai raped by his familiar
In Ch.1.5 -> Ai is not having any trauma about it and adding to it, she wants to experience it once more
in Ch.2 -> Ai coming to the house of the rapist expecting she'd get raped again (pg.4) and end up "doing it"
So if you get my point, their relationship isn't just some plain "sex". Then describing "犯す" as "rape" by the story itself will make more sense imho. I mean, I'm not fully liretally translated "犯す" as "rape" without any reason, I'm thinking the word "sex" is too broad and i want to narrow it down to something that's more "screwing the person" as it is how "犯す” is used.

The next correction in the mentioned bubble would be,
Since they are in a quarrel, and Ai says this to dare him, "Now it'll be your responsibility to make me cum everyday".
and then Yuuto is confronting it with an ill humor is somewhat fine imo.
To be having a stuttered agreement line ("A-Ai. I'll have sex with you every day then!") would be unfit for the atmosphere. It does makes sense if you literally see that texts only though.

@PsychicDoom
Thanks for pointing them out.
I will try to improve on the next attempt

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@OP
Do that but consider improving the script on this one as well. I really like Bunga and this work in particular but these errors are distracting me from the enjoyment. I know other people might not mind but please keep in mind that there are people like me too. Thanks for the effort.

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@laponretsim

If that's the case then I apologise for that comment I made. However, you definitely need to improve your English or like @PsychicDoom suggested, get someone to proofread your work.

Right now, on top of the numerous grammatical mistakes, the English sounds so unnatural that there's very little continuity between each line. Also you should choose words that best convey the tone and current context. In the case of the line I previously pointed out, it becomes very jarring or even downright comedic if its not consistent to the current tone and story. If it's supposed to be somewhat cheeky / playful in nature then I suggest using quotation marks, bolding or perhaps Italics to indicate that.

Unlike Japanese, in English we sometimes need to explicitly mention what "it" is unless it's very obvious, so don't be afraid to mention the fine details of what is currently happening or what exactly "it" is.
Filling in the blanks helps the reader clue in and understand the context of what is currently happening a lot better.

An example I would give is the words 好き which would make perfect sense on its own in Japanese but you can't simply say "I like it" or "I love it" in English in most cases since what exactly "it" is isn't clear.

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@PsychicDoom

tagging, thanks

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You can't rape the willing. (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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