It’s a pretty good plot and renders, it’s just the dialogue is a little off probably I’m guessing the author isn’t a native English speaker? I think maybe letting someone who’s more fluent In English assist them might help solve the problem, but so far it’s great!

Base +4, incogna777 +9

The concept is good but kinda disappointed the artist took other comics of his and inserted those into this one. There are recycled panels from "A Christmas Carol", "End of Summer', "Artworks & Misc Sets", "The Tenant 2". There may be a *few* that are original but most are just recycled from other works and, in some cases, he added dialogue. I hope next time he creates a comic with over 100 pages, all of the panels are original. Sorry but I have to rate this one star.

Base +6

There's an idiot who stole my work and put some iliterate phrases over my images. That's not the original author's work. I usually release comics as series with no bubble text over it. So if you want the original stuff, consider subscribing to my patreon instead.

Base +3, Chyor +6