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Why the fuck did you decide to replace all the sfx when you're clearly too lazy to even do anything other than healing brush over it. You can't tell me that there's no problems with page 4 which is so egregiously bad even when compared to the other pages.
Pg 1: I'm always honest to my own feeling > I'm always honest with my own feelings! Then you have nothing to say if I'm gonna use it on you, right? > Then it's fine if I use it on you right? Let's just try it, just think about it as an experiment > c'mon let me have a quick try! just think of it as an experiment!
Pg 2: Duh, it's not "prez" now, you understand? > jeez, didn't I tell you not to call me prez? fufu, what do you think about my titfuck? do you feel like cumming now? > fufu, do my boobs really feel that good? (I have no idea how you got what you did) Don't resist it, let it all out! > No need to hold back, please shoot out a whole lot (for me)
Pg 3: It's going limp > It's gotten so small huh Haa... Smelling your semen makes my mind go wild > Haa... The smell of cum... makes me get even hornier... Noo you can't... I want to have more sex with Adachi-kun > No way, I want to have more sex with Adachi-kun
Pg 4: Your raw penis is so much better than any sex toy... I love it > I knew it, I'll always love the real thing more than any sex toy... You have to love me harder, Adachi-kun > Adachi-kun... Fall deeper in love with me I want you to think I am the only one you desire for life > Please fall so deep that you can't imagine living without me
Pg 5: Does your porn addiction start to take an effect on you? > Did you watch too much porn again? Don't tell me, are you planning on some indecent things again!? > Don't tell me... you plan on doing some indecent things to me again?!
I honestly don't know how you ended up with some of your translations considering that it's not at all what it says in the raws. Also, please for the love of god use punctuation.