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(C101) [Tsukuten (Madoka Tsukumo)] Watashi no Ouji-sama | My Prince (Blue Archive) [English]

(C101) [つくてん (円つくも)] 私の王子様 (ブルーアーカイブ) [英訳]

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Posted:2023-02-14 13:22
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:66.50 MiB
Length:27 pages
Favorited:140 times
Rating:
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Average: 1.96

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Posted on 14 February 2023, 14:29 by:   Mr_Person    PM
Score +159
I really think this is MTL since you didn't TL any of the floating text or SFX but I could be wrong who knows.

pg 3.

I wish Seia-san is also here but she still recovering > I wish Seia-san was here as well but she's still recovering.

She just want you to be more discipline > She just wants you to be more disciplined

Sensei? What happen with you down here? > Sensei? What happened to you down here/ Sensei? What's happening with you down here?

Nothing, It's just I can see Mika's chest and armpit just now > Nothing, it's just I saw Mika's chest and armpits just now

pg 8.

I will make you feel good as much as you want. > I'll make you feel as good as you want (this sentence still sucks but at least it's grammatically correct now)

pg. 16

When Sensei spoil me like this. > When Sensei spoils me like this...

I want to do something back for Sensei... > I want to give something back for Sensei.../It makes me want to do something for him...

Sensei should also feels good as me > Sensei should also feel as good as me/as I am

pg 18.

Sensei, does my pussy make you feels good? > Sensei, does my pussy make you feel good?

pg 22.

Mika, it's enough... > Mika, that's enough...

pg 24.

Because I'm definitely having a really weird face right now > Because I definitely have a really weird face right now/Because my face definitely looks really weird right now
Posted on 14 February 2023, 14:44 by:   Janus Mask    PM
Score +80
Posted on 14 February 2023, 14:47 by:   Zugen_xD    PM
Score +124
Consider the poor typesetting and the occasionally weird wording, it's safe to assume that OP has done this book an injustice.
Posted on 14 February 2023, 14:53 by:   Zenith801    PM
Score -100
It's just that neither language are actually my first language. So I'm pretty much still learning both english and japanese but that's really nice of you to correct it. Regarding the floating text and SFX, this is my first stuff so I'm not on that level yet to clean them up all by myself.
Posted on 14 February 2023, 15:04 by:   Mr_Person    PM
Score +166
@Zenith801

I think this goes without saying but, if you're not proficient in both the language you're translating into and the language you're translating from, you should not be translating.
Posted on 21 February 2023, 10:17 by:   rsx205    PM
Score +37
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OG: 授業遅れちゃって…
TL: N/A
ED: she's says she fell behind in class

OG: いえ、色々ありましたので
TL: "No, it's fine"
ED: she mentions that a lot of stuff happened (and it leads directly into the next line where she wishes Seia were around too)

OG: 耳が痛いよナギちゃん…
TL: "My ears will hurt, Nagi-chan"
ED: as in, Seia will talk Mika's ears off

006
OG: 待っ…
TL: N/A
ED: Wai-

007
OG: 怒っー
TL: Mmm...
ED: "mad-" this is a continuation from the prev panel

010
OG: えへへ♡いっぱい出たぁ♡
TL: "Ehehe, you let out a lot inside me"
ED: I mean it's clearly not inside

OG: 溜まってたんだ、先生♡
TL: "I was fully covered with it, Sensei"
ED: she's talking about how backed up he was

011
OG: こんなところに入れたら
TL: "If he put it in while I'm like this"
ED: wrong speaker

014
OG: こんなに幸せで許されるのかな…?
TL: "Am I allowed to be forgiven and be happy?"
ED: couldn't pick the right definition so you just picked both? "Am I allowed to be this happy...?"

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OG: ミカと一緒にイキたい!!
TL: "I want to live with Mika"
ED: he's saying he wants to cum together lol I'm done

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