I been wanting to make a NSFW comic for a while.
Some months ago i started doing this one
it will have 44 pages (everything have been sketched already) and since im uploading it for free everywhere, why not here too?
Hope you readers Enjoy it
PS: Sorry for any English mistakes, I'm Brazilian and self thought so my English do slip up sometimes

Art isn't terrible, that cursive needs to go though.

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You only need one capital letter per sentence, not every single word. Leave your OCD out of stuff like this.

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@CaptainFalcon333

JFC, I just realized that they are capitalizing every new line, regardless if the sentence is a continuation or not, lmao.
And well, sometimes the odd word with a capitalization as well sprinkled here and there for no reason other than not caring about whatever they learned at school.

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@BeetchFagget

Actually im doing cause i made a poor choice of font when i started writing this comic dialogues
some letters end up conecting in a weird way when used together with Segoe Script

But since no one seem to know what font would look better, im continuing with this one until i finish the comic or until someone offer me a better option.
Also, my caligraphy is terrible so writing is out of question

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Try...Calibri?

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Alright, fine
Next update, i will rewrite everything in Calibri and stop the Letter thing
Unless someone have a better font option

Last edited on 27 August 2023, 20:28.

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