Damn this was fucking hot, I enjoy interspecies, birth and a good ending? what a rare treat?

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So what happened to the douche bag human? They let him live or what?

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I am seriously impressed with the story, both humans and elf have mixed a lot, so much that humans will be assimilated by the elf race, and even more if Shawa has a son with royal blood, which could lead to the formation of an elf empire.

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Didn't check TL accuracy, but the fact that you skipped all the handwritten dialogue isn't encouraging.

almost every page: untranslated dialogue. That's right - not everything that's handwritten is moans or SFX. You CAN read handwritten text... right? Also, don't try to stick to exact JP phrasing and grammatical structures. It just makes stuff really awkward to read.

hyphens happen BEFORE, not after.

Mega-
man

and not

Mega
-man

rough grammar (just a sample)

p.22 you can't make this > ?? incomplete sentence
p.22 with it's mother
p.8 is it your first time? // or is it just because you're a virgin? > don't these lines mean the exact same thing? maybe it should be "Is it your first time with an elf/someone like me?"
p.8 for mouthy elves like these > technically referring to her, so "like her"
p.9 it's death
p.18 this kind of a body > this kind of body [better would be: I've never felt/experienced anything like her body/this kind of body before...]
p.19 if I ever look > looked
p.19 this ones head > one's
p.19 assult
p.24 it's to intense
p.24 don't full

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torrent file please

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Do I have to tap the sign again?
"Around Elves, watch yoursELF!" -Old Dwarven Proverb

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Knew after such a long wait the best we'd get is a half assed ESL translation...

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p.15 "it's my first time taking dick"

is that the boy saying this? i'm sure arlen boned him in pt.3

it didn't look like the voice bubble pointed to the half-ogre chick?

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Was overjoyed when I saw this has been translated, then the "rough grammar" tag killed it.

Hopefully the guys who worked on the previous Shaua doujins will fix things.

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Seeing your favourite doujin series get butchered with poor grammar and inaccurate translations is like watching your favourite pub burn down.

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@Cutegyaru

Stop Bitching and put your lazy ass to work

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I think the half elf with royal blood is girl, so a princess

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@moncho5489
Click on my profile and check my uploads, retard.

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@CuteGyaru Gonna Cry 😂😂😂

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Better translation is out

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