Happy Birthday, Mika

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That XD face

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There's still some untranslated text on the bottom-left panel of page 5.

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@Zugen_xD

No use mentioning it because it's not that he missed it, he couldn't even read it in the first place. It's MTL-ed is what I'm saying.

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not sure how you chose to TL certain things vs others but you also ended up erasing some text completely

004
OG: 悩みごと！？
TL: "What's gotten into you!?"
ED: he's asking what's on her mind

OG: …そういうのじゃないよ
TL: "That's not what I meant."
ED: she's answering his question (directly related to prev panel)

005
OG: ミカ！？
TL: N/A

OG: こっ！！これはちがくて…
TL: N/A
ED: erased bubble

OG: つべこべ言わず脱げー！！
TL: N/A

OG: きゃー
TL: N/A

007
OG: ミ…ミカ…
TL: N/A

OG: だめだって…
TL: N/A

013
OG: どうかな先生
TL: "I don't know sensei..."
ED: she's not saying she doesn't know

OG: 先生もいっぱい気持ちよくなってほしいな…♥
TL: "I want to feel good too"
ED: she's not talking about herself

014
OG: だせっ / だせっ
TL: "N/A"

015
OG: すまないミカ！！大丈夫か！？
TL: "That was dangerous Mika!! Are you okay!?"
ED: he's not saying it was dangerous

etc

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Chinese: /g/2450795/09bc1128a5/
Korean: /g/2504796/f74ea946da/

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@Reknownunknown Mika does that face all the time, that now I find it unironically funny

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