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Taken from DLSite: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01067775.html/?translation=RJ01067776

Credit for translation belongs to Darg777 Translations

Nothing to say about this. Good art. Dumb story. Fap and move on.

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This is why you never trust gyarus

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This happen to unassertive dudes.

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The guy deserve it for being such a wimp. Also, this work is by far the lowest sold work of this group, even NTR fans were giving it low stars because it was too stupid.

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I let this beta-cuck infuriate me for longer than I would like. even if he didn't get the girl in the end the other two guys seemed like enough of a bro to let him have a go with them too.

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How do you remotely fuck this up? The girl was begging to get dicked by you and you both confessed to each other. And EVEN THEN you're too much fo a pussy to go for her when there are 2 other guys eyeballing her.

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@ Zaiup
> even NTR fans were giving it low stars because it was too stupid.
Wow, and I thought I was just being too quick to criticize this. I'm also an NTR fan, atleast to a good extent that I like a lot of NTR works, but yea there are some can still irk me to dislike them, depending on the situation. And this is definitely one of those works which I just can't even like to read, and I've read the entire milf doujin by MTSP and liked it.

Edit: Just to give an idea how much of an NTR fan I am for anyone curious, it's literally my #1 searched tag before everything else to check if anything's new.

Last edited on 01 July 2023, 20:21.

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This is why imo , current NTR doujin relied way too much on good art rather than a convincing plot , and i have read way too much NTR for decade , the decline in plot is real and most of newbie artist count on us to turn off part of ours brain and just accept NTR happen out of nowhere :/

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NTR should apply for the Olympics just for the amount of mental gymnastics one has to do when reading it.

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"Do you have a condom?"
> Proceeds to not do it because of no condom.
> Don't do it at any point "because schedule".
> Go on camping trip.
> Do it instantly, no condom with random dude because uh yes.

Is the author even trying to not make it brain dead stupid?

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So its basically this /g/2402901/965a225434/

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Lol, the older dudes creepin on HS'ers and girls being curious is more realistic than the kids behaviour. "Our schedules never lined up" and he put in little to no effort to try and have sex again after that?
At that age I would have done whatever it took to get laid. Especially after she showed clear interest that she wants to have sex too. Fucking drop everything on my "schedule", lied to get out the house, stolen parents money to get a hotel.

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P.7 Damn son, didn't knew Clark Kent was a teacher in this school

Well, that could end way worse for the main chara, being such a pussy the whole time he at least has the friendship of the dudes, who were more open about share than your regular NTR antagonist, also, even when they end up wth the girls, the gyaru is that much of a fuckfriend that she will gave him some sexual favors anyway, that's way more of what 99% of the NTRd guys get at the end of these stories, he had it way nicer than most of the other losers

Last edited on 30 June 2023, 03:34.

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I find it funny how many people are complaining about the "bad plot" when much of real life situations where cheating ends up happening are very much like these "bad plots". I know of too many stories where cheating women get caught and then give stupid justifications as to why they cheated that would be worse than some of the "bad plot" we see here. The most unrealistic thing is the number of times the guys can cum, but that's universal to hentai.

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you know its real bad when even japanese NTR fans give it low ratings

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This shit feels like a parody mostly because nothing absolutely bad happen to this dude or anyone in particular. And by doing absolutely nothing, well not really he also got fucked over by the gyaru many times.
Anyways at the end he ends up losing his v-card to a really hot girl, proceeded to bang both girls, unlimited free blowjobs, he's still inside their friends circle since no one was hurt in fact they all had a blast camping and fucking, broz4lyfe with NTRmen and also he has the advantage of literally not being strings attached to any of these women because he's now their sexfriend. Free sex without the burden of a relationship? This dude must be loved by the hentai universe.
Hell it looks like at the end he realized he dodged a bullet because the black haired chick ended up being a massive slut too.

I can add some nitpicks like some developments are straight up fucking retarded but that's just NTR hentai world logic to us no point in discussing that. The out of nowhere 2nd NTRman made the NTR feel less impactful. NTR it's something that I personally find stronger when it's done by a single person, more than one or a group kind of diminish the effect, at least to me.

Reading this feels like the stars aligned perfectly for this guy to have a godly camping weekend but isn't it funny to think that maybe just maybe if he did or said something to actually be proactive and get one of the girls maybe he could ended up like the other cucked losers in other stories just fapping in their rooms alone in despair after being brutally NTR'd? Lol.

@pleomaxx
NTR is truly the thinking's man fetish

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"Man, NTR plots are always the same, terrible and unrealistic!!"

*continues to read the same recycled harem/threesomes where some 5/10 dude attracts supermodels everywhere he goes*

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at least the bulls and girls are not assholes and the MC actually gets some action and isn't a complete idiot.

Last edited on 30 June 2023, 20:56.

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look at these NTR fags, act like they're some shit of elitist. Just enjoy the doujin you fucktards

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I don't get why people call this dump NTR plot. I wouldn't call it a masterpiece, but I would say it's decent. MC is kinda wimpy and could be more assertive, but it wouldn't save him from getting NTRed anyway. Gyaru is a slut from the start and black haired one would cuck him with Chad even if MC took her virginity first. Black haired didn't want to go raw with MC, but did with Chad just because she wanted Chad.

When I think of really dumb NTR plots it's something like - "I have a photo of you taking a shit! - Oh noes, now I have no choice but to become your sex slave because of the photo of me taking an ogre shit!" (real NTR btw) or "Uhhhh, this guy is not fucking me, he is giving me a special massage! - Oh, ok" (also real NTR) or anything with hypnosis because it's just zero effort NTR.

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bros... real ;_;

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Do you have a condom ?? No you can't have sex without condom

Random NTR guy with big cock just whip out his thing in front of her : Let raw fuck baby

YESSSSSS

LOL Sure, whatever.

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That's rough buddy.

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And that's why Japan is full of lolicons.

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Most cuck MC I have ever seen. And I have seen a lot.
How can u even remotely F this up. Just stand up and tell them she is your girlfriend. Then take her to the forest and satisfy her lust. → girlfriend acquired, happy end. Just do it with her everyday after and watch her tightly and gg

Instead he lets someone else do her in front of him, and doesn’t even remotely try to stop them…
Then again, this is fiction, if it were a vanilla where the hero saves the girl, then no one will click in…

Anyway, the MC is spared of the FMC from betraying him in the future, behind his back, after the marriage, now that he is aware of the true tendencies of her and can find someone else. Unless he has no problem of his wife carrying the kid of another man… and gets off of it. Probably a Happy End for him then if he enjoys that feeling…

But yea, the both of them are not even committed to each other, so the FMC has the right to choose the more handsome/muscular/wealthy partner. The MC would probably also choose an more beautiful girl over the FMC, if the FMC were not beautiful.

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@saddasads, dgjddgjdgj Well, actually I think that if the MC was more assertive, she would've fucked him without a condom. In the first place, he was the one who mentioned condoms and cared about them, she seemed DTF either way.

@Hi98 It's not his job to stop other dudes from fucking her consensually, it's hers if she told him she likes him. If she consents to other dudes fucking her, then she obviously doesn't like him enough and is just an easy whore.

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The gyaru girl was actually kinda nice (past a certain point), and the other guys acted decently. That rare enough to be noticed, only the girl with black hair behaved kinda horribly, promising him stuff and then "oh I'll be this guy girlfriend now", but she doesn't even seem to notice.
Honestly, I forgive the stupid plot just for how the characters feel different for once. Except the MC, very generic passive soyboy who deserved what happened. The girl with black hair was kinda generic too, as the betraying sow.

Funny how people here blame the gyaru while she was more genuine than the other one.

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The gyaru was the best part - more than willing to share the wealth around even with the cuck, and still eager to suck him off even after she gets "taken" again, without being ordered or asked to by one of the "bulls." That's kind of fresh for an NTR. All the other characters were pretty generic though, with completely illogical behavior especially for teenagers. The slutty gyaru was the most believable and consistent. The author clearly intended to signal that she had affection for the MC if nothing else.

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I love watching losers get cucked, netori is great, but this is just pathetically bad, this author sucks, good art though.

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The one few time an MC got pussy in NTR... and people hate it. Cmon

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He could have refused the phone. But he chose to be the camera guy.
He could have joined them. But he chose to be the cuck.

I cant feel bad for him.

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@vjbeal96 Bad plot? Lol? It's way too fucking realistic which probably was THE reason NTR fans who behave too close to MC were giving it low scores.

Senpai nicely asked and MC explicitly told his senpai that he's NOT interested in any of two girls - he explicitly allowed girl he was interested in to be fair game, despite given chance to prevent it.
Senpai urged gyaru to suck him off in first place and MC couldn't convert it into fucking for months.
"Shy" girl practically offered him herself and he didn't press it and then spent months not fucking her. Newsflash: girls DO get over feeling whatever love after months of being ignored.
I've seen 3/4 of whatever depicted in this doujin IRL in some circles, including "all love-love shy girl riding random cock of new guy in few hours after meeting him because her love-love was too indecisive and never made any advances at her".

This is completely different from 95% of NTR where "small dick MC" outdone by evil bull that constantly degrades MC. Here MC was well-endowed and his sempai, once again, arranged for him a chance to show off his dick to both girls.
I wouldn't even call this story NTR because MC never made any of two girls his girlfriend in the first place.

You can't really expect those older healthy guys to ignore girls who practically beg to be fucked when MC already said "not interested".

I hoped this author would have more of those non-standard type works, but unfortunately it seems rest of his work are typical "small dick MC outdone by evil bull that constantly degrades MC" type mentioned above.

Last edited on 22 March 2024, 05:10.

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Some people say it make no sense that she first refuse to have raw sex with the mc and accept later with chad guy but if you read more closely you would seen that she say she on pill since 3 day that mean she comme prepare to have raw sex if the mc forget again the candom. That mean she plan to have sex in this trip. MC digs his own chad guy would have not take the girl if would say he like her.
And the black hair girl in think basicaly choice to become chad girlfriend because she think mc is not intereste in her.

Overall if you use rationality the mc situation is not too bad he still in good terme with both girl still gyaru girl sex friend and i doubt the 2 chad guy will keep the girl for long. The black girl is more the sex friend of the guy that his girlfriend and i think black hair girl and mc have a good compatibility in the long run he will have no probleme to have a solide relation with the girl if he corige the missunderstong that he not interest. Of course since it hentai world it totaly possible that hair girl will just start to go with all chad she seen but i think it more a temporare periode beford she end up with mc

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