[Dokuneko Noil] Deisui shita Nishikigi Chisato ni Warui Koto o suru Hanashi | A Story About Doing Bad Things to a Drunk Nishikigi Chisato (Lycoris Recoil) [English] [Gagak_Ireng]

02: Is that as delicious as people said? => (generality, maybe prefer the same tense) / Is that as delicious as people say?
02: it's good. The water of life. => (Japanese syntax) / (this) water of life is good.
03: You drink => (done deed, prefer past tense) / You drank
07: I can't help but to kiss => I can't help but kiss
10: Chisato-chan win => (3rd person, also maybe prefer past tense as done deed) / Chisato-chan wins / Chisato-chan won
12: Am I somehow... Ended up => (wrong auxiliary) / Did i somehow... End up
14: I'll see => (maybe prefer an expectation) / I'll get to see

Last edited on 10 August 2023, 06:37.

Posted on 01 August 2023, 20:23 by: DirtyOldDude

I love it when bitches get fertilized.

Posted on 01 August 2023, 23:31 by: Vulture_ireng

@smilegate, pembayaran gimana?

Posted on 02 August 2023, 00:13 by: tomstarPrime

Nnooo please dont netorize this series :(

Posted on 02 August 2023, 01:35 by: Bjoey99

Nice thanks for the translation bro

Posted on 02 August 2023, 01:38 by: SmileGate

@vultute_ireng punya gopay kah gan? Cek ehentai forum gan, gw pm

Posted on 02 August 2023, 05:16 by: Farmuhan

Njerr cepet banget

Posted on 07 August 2023, 02:06 by: aggron1979

For those who don't understand the indonesian, they're discussing commissioning about translation and payment

Posted on 23 February 2024, 21:58 by: minnazzo

This one is way hotter than the one with Takina.

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language:	english translated
parody:	lycoris recoil
character:	chisato nishikigi
artist:	dokuneko noil
male:	dilf sole male
female:	defloration drunk impregnation nakadashi rape schoolgirl uniform sole female
other:	full color multi-work series