I tried to translate the books from zuru. I hope you like it.

Marisa's thrill:
Part 1: /g/2075204/4fb36d2db7/ --- Original: /g/1468916/2ed633622c/
Part 1 reworked with another font: /g/2083480/3b2f90391a/
Part 2: /g/2075982/596cf3abf1/ --- Original: /g/1468916/2ed633622c/
Part 3: /g/2076710/19e8e4d98f/ --- Original: /g/1757356/22b5c92217/
Part 4: /g/2077608/d4c60cf46d/ --- Original: -
Part 5: /g/2078514/78ea114ca4/ --- Original: /g/2052886/27dfe60497/
Part 6: /g/2356996/c9990889e3/ --- Original: /g/2306410/8ca2181b2d/
Part 7: /g/2362513/ca32385480/ --- Original: /g/2321034/fa41ec8429/
Part 8: /g/2643424/f25642eb18/ --- Original: /g/2585546/7e8eee8c2d/

Escape Queen Juna:
Part 1: /g/2648169/426bae23ec/ --- Original: /g/2474740/c0dfe43183/
Part 2: /g/2768546/55501fe23f/ --- Original: /g/2700481/c793ca3feb/

this went past ryona and became a horror story

Base +8, jason12052011 +7, Supernatural23 +6

I liked much more the old story, this one is boring guro

Base +6, Zakuzelo +14, Supernatural23 +6, Dememori +7, Nasholmo +7

We just need the musical number.

Base +9

It's not my favorite ending.
The endings of parts 5 and 7 were better.

Thanks, Zurusfan, for bringing all the parts.

Base +10

Ah, the final part is just a quick and messy revenge ending. I guess there are people that would get angry at Marisa after having guiltily fapped through seven chapters and childishly think "I'm so mad at that bitch! I'll tell everyone what I'd do to her in real life in the comments" and this is an ending that might satisfy them. But to me the ending seems overdone in it's violence, lacking in build up and nuance. It would just quickly drive Marisa insane rather than make her regret her actions like Satori ultimately did. It would be a good start if we could expect another seven chapters of Marisa slowly and creatively being made to regret her actions but that is obviously not the case.

Art 7. Plot 6. Sexiness 7. Translation 4. All out of 10.

Base +10