well, as someone who loves his own hobby, here some tips to improve:
1. Have someone proofread the English text, there are several places, where there are better words to use. 2. The panel content has a very low resolution, compared to the total page/image. Either spend more time on rendering the panel, so it is clearer, or reduce the size of the page, so the panel resolution is closer to the actual page.
these should be the 2 main reasons, why your stories are down-voted.