Does anybody actually enjoy these rewrites? They are universally terrible.

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For the translated full manga: /g/255150/a3580ed1e2/

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if you're going to ruin hentai with your rewrites, at least do those that haven't been translated

and don't post them on e-hentai.

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I enjoy these rewrites. For once they depict a woman choosing copulation for herself, although exagerated to the exreme. The idea behind the real series depicts one of debauchery and the sinful act of sex.

Sorry to say, but it seems more masochistic if you secretly can't enjoy it...

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Totally dreadfully Awful I actually felt physical pain when I read a single pg of this,rewrites like this are the equivalent of drawing tits and a moustache on the mona lisa,its just vandalism

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*SPOILER ALERT*

Don't Read Further if u didn't read the entire manga...

*SPOILER ALERT*

Sorry to say this... but that child isnt Shuuichi's Child... the story's name is "Sayuki no Sato" which means "Village of Sayuki"
the baby Shuuichi is holding in page 22 is Sayuki... which means she was born in "Both endings" of the story...

and here is the bad news... if the story is called "Village of Sayuki" it means that in "Both Ends" Sayuki is born...
which means that Shuuichi isnt the father of Sayuki... Takeru is the father of the "1st Child of village, 2nd child of Yukiko - Takeichi" and the "4rth Child of village, 5th child of Yukiko - Sayuki"

it sucks bad that they dont even recognize Shuuichi as Yukiko's child even... they called Takeichi "Takeru's Child" as Yukiko's 1st child... and Shuuichi not even as a existing person... and Sayuki "Takure's 2nd Child by Yukiko" as Yukiko's 4rth Child... even though its actually her 5th Child cause of Shuuichi being her actual 1st child... messed up... but thats part of Sanbun Kyoden's Charm i guess...

sorry if i made a few people sad, but thats how the sanbun kyoden cookie crumbles ^_^
long live Sanbun Kyoden!

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I do like the rewrite！ A good story！

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