[Chirinu Iroha] Hakoiri Musume wa Pet ni Ochiru -Zenpen- | A young spoiled girl falls into a pet... - Part 1 (COMIC Kaien Vol. 01) [English] [Script Cave] [Digital]
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translation aside, I'm not sure how much I'd rely on those scripts. I skimmed over a few on that server and even the transcriptions aren't entirely accurate either
at the very least you can definitely tell they're not being transcribed by hand. if they ARE being transcribed by hand, then they're not being transcribed with human eyes. anyway I'd be careful with them
001 OG: カードでお願いします… TL: "Please use your card..." ED: wrong speaker
OG: カードはちょっと… TL: "It's not enough..." ED: they don't take cards
003 OG: お嬢それセルフだよ TL: "You're from a rich family right?" ED: completely made up translation
OG: えっ!!?そうなんですか… TL: "Eh?! What's that... ED: she's reacting in shock to the information she just received, not asking for information
OG: 友達も作れなかった私に… TL: "I didn't have any friends." ED: "I couldn't make any friends..."
OG: 声を掛けてくれたのも彼です TL: N/A ED: missing line
OG: 一人だったら一緒に食べない? TL: "If you're alone, why don't you eat with us?" ED: why is he plural?
OG: すみませ~ん TL: N/A ED: missing line
006 OG: いつもしつこく誘ってごめんね TL: "I'm sorry I'm always pestering you." ED: missing detail on what he pesters her about
OG: お嬢は経験無いだろうなって TL: "I don't think you've ever had anything like that." ED: this makes it sound like he doesn't believe her own experiences vs the "normal" experiences he talks about on the previous panel
008 OG: ハイ TL: Hi. ED: ??? this is some cursed levels of MTL
OG: 俺アガリ~! TL: "Agari!" ED: you didn't even attempt to translate this and just removed the pronoun
OG: お嬢〜ナニぼさっとしてんの〜? TL: "Miss, why are you so lazy?" ED: he is not questioning her work ethic
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