Your first story has drug along forever and still hasn't reached its first sex scene. So instead of focusing on that you decide to make a second story. You want money so you can supposedly publish this story more frequently. I would much rather spend my money on a bet that before you even reach the first sex scene on this story you will already be putting out a third.
It is just so blatantly obvious the carrot and stick operation that you're running here.
Not going to pay for getting blue balls. You could at least make a torrent, if you want more people to get know about your work (and that's the idea I suppose as you are posting it here). Here without torrent, with this size, without sex... it's just nonsense to download it (unless one is for getting blue balls of course).
Base +7, Chief Slapaho +11, jjaysenea2003 +6, Raphael Rake +6