006 OG: 恋人同士の一大イベントにはじめてのお泊り…というものがある TL: "A major event for a pair of lovers would be the first time they stay together at a hotel...or so I've heard." ED: not necessarily at a hotel, just spending the night together
OG: つーか…赤城の家族が旅行中と言っても…流石に不謹慎すぎるだろ TL: "Then again...saying travelling[sic] to Akagi's house is that sort of trip...is a bit unscrupulous" ED: this line is completely off, he's talking about Akagi's family being on a trip
007 OG: あがった…そ? TL: "Is this..okay?" ED: this line is completely made up, it's connected to the previous bubble
009 OG: こ…こら! TL: "T-this...!" ED: he's not saying "this", it's just an interjection of surprise
OG: どこ入って…つか舐めるなぁ! TL: "Wherever you enter...do you really always have to lick?!" ED: he's not saying wherever you enter, he's asking where he's sticking his head
013 OG: え?フツー TL: "EH?" ED: missing second half of line
016 OG: 高坂ってメガネかけてたっけ? TL: "Kosaka, you sometimes wears glasses, right?" ED: the intent is Akagi never noticed Kosaka wearing glasses before
017 OG: よく見えるんなら俺のまつ毛でも数えてれば? TL: "If it looks good, why don't you hold onto my hair?" ED: this line is completely made up, he's telling him to count his eyelashes if he can see so well (related to next line)
018 OG: コキ合いくらいならやらせてくれっかなあ TL: "Let me at least masturbate with you." ED: he's wondering to himself
OG: でけえよバカ TL: "You big idiot!" ED: he's talking about his dick
021 OG: もうちょっと我慢して TL: "I just barely have a little more restraint..." ED: he's not talking about himself
etc
Base +38, isno +6, StraightOuttaCIA +6, cliso1096 +3, markptj123 +1