idk it seems kinda rewritey
there's even sfx that changed for no clear reason

004
OG: 赤沢先輩は？
TL: Where is Aka-senpai?
ED: his name is Akazawa

OG: 買い出し？
TL: What is it?
ED: he's asking about the shopping trip

OG: どこまでも厨二で愉快な部活だ
TL: Even the name sounds childish
ED: this isn't about the club as a whole

005
OG: この部活にふさわしい厨二…遊び心溢れる先輩だ
TL: As the founder, she's also quite...innocent
ED: this is about how she has the right amount of edge and humor for the club

OG: そんな熱意向けてもらえてあのお菓子作った人も嬉しいですよきっと
TL: Well, you might be right
ED: he's telling her that the creator of the sweets would be happy about what she said

OG: 活動内容は知育菓子を作って食べたり
TL: Club activities are mainly making and tasting snacks
ED: missing detail, educational value

OG: 仮装愛好お菓子研究会とかに改名した方がいいんじゃ？
TL: We should change our club name...something like snack tasting club?
ED: missing detail about costumes

OG: 活動をはじめる
TL: But well, this is a great place
ED: this is about how the "activities" are gonna begin

OG: 赤沢先輩もいないことだし
TL: And right now, Aka-senpai isn't here
ED: his name is Akazawa

007
OG: 正確には魔法ではなく
TL: I've always been able to
ED: he's talking about how it's not actually magic

OG: 女の子を俺の思い通りに操ることが出来る
TL: To bend people to my will
ED: he's only talking about girls

008
OG: こんなに夢中になるとか
TL: How lewd, Usa-senpai
ED: this is about how she's unexpectedly into it

OG: 陰キャで厨二で世間知らずなくせにドスケベな先輩
TL: You look innocent, but you're just as dirty as the rest of us!
ED: missing detail shy, childish, edgy

OG: せめて超能力や催眠が使える人間がいると思ってたのに
TL: There should at least be one magic user here
ED: he was expecting at least a psychic or hypnotist

009
OG: 前回から喉奥で受け止められるようになったから…ッ
TL: I'm gonna send it straight to the back
ED: he's talking about her ability to deepthroat which started during the previous time (related to next few lines)

OG: 今日もお願いします
TL: So make sure
ED: he's asking for it again today

OG: 宇佐先輩のせっまい喉奥に…っ！！
TL: You drink it all...!
ED: he wants to cum all the way down her throat

OG: どうっすか
TL: Good girl
ED: he's asking what she thinks

OG: そろそろ俺の精液の味覚えられそう？
TL: Do you like the taste that much?
ED: he's asking if she's developing a taste for his cum

etc

Base +39, Fofotron +19, cybeast93 +27, faytT +8, Aristoplato +11, soliloquy +31, Mastemo +9, breanyman +6

is it MTL?

Base +21, Träumerei +6