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Posted:2024-06-21 19:19
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Posted on 21 June 2024, 19:19 by:   Roxxxy101    PM
Uploader Comment
Hellooo, i have been writing soft core eroticas for a while now but is the first time i'm doing something hard and explicit with 3d animation, i hope it's good
alsoo, im not really sure about the export quality, the last page and a couple of pages are on the highest export quality, i just wanna know if there's a visible difference and if i should spend the couple extra mins per image to make sure you get the highest quality?

also do check out my patreon for early releases and exclusive stories that will be coming very soon
www.patreon.com/Roxxxy101

and thanks a lot for reading, next chapter is already out on patreon and will drop here soon enough, thanks!
Posted on 21 June 2024, 19:27 by:   Flashking666    PM
Score +41
Already a patreon huh? well whatever the story seems good enough looking forward to where it goes
gender bender cannot be tagged since there is no bending happening as of now
Posted on 26 June 2024, 04:38 by:   TheBindingOfMahiro    PM
Score +21
This looks pretty interesting, if not... Rushed? Maybe that's the right word? I get wanting to be quick and not be a slog like some other Koikatsu based stories that are around, but I feel like we're missing a story(like why the character is here, what's going on, etc.) I get leaving it for later, but having at least a little page of the backstory, or even just the MC entering the house or something and then establishing why he was there would have been nice. Also, the single character and a bit of text format for Koikatsu content has never fully appealed to me, and having more traditional paneling or at least incorporating more characters into the shot and using angles would be nice, but that's up creative choices, and if this is what you like creatively, no harm done! Despite the gripes I do enjoy this, and I'm looking forward to this and whatever future works you make!
Posted on 26 June 2024, 08:02 by:   Roxxxy101    PM
Score +7
@TheBindingOfMahiro hey i totally get your point, and yes the "rushed" feeling is kinda correct, initially my plan was to explain the backstory through a simple blackscreen and text in the first page itself, but after a while of trying to plot things out, i decided to instead use the backstory as a sort of a driving mechanism and slowly reveal it in the story itself, and then maybe we could have a "oh so that's why that happened" kind of moment, i just felt a lore dump would be too straightforward and when the story has no mass you just keep trying to drag it on with sidequests or just take things slowly, so i just thought of taking it slow with the back story itself, and about the visuals well i'll try to put more pages into one scene and i have been trying that for scenes that i want to feel have some momentum but lets see, most of the time it just doesnt feel very blended in, but thanks a lot for the input, greatly appreciate it.
Posted on 08 July 2024, 09:27 by:   RuinVS    PM
Score +9
I saw your post on Patreon but couldn't comment there. Just a heads-up: Patreon has strict guidelines about hypnosis content. I've encountered issues with them in the past, but removing the problematic material usually resolves things. If you haven't already, I suggest reading Patreon's 18+ guidelines, although they can be quite vague. Good luck!
Posted on 13 July 2024, 17:19 by:   onlythecoolesthere    PM
Score +6
Rather than removing the content, just move to one of the dozen other paid content sites..
Posted on 18 July 2024, 13:52 by:   Roxxxy101    PM
Score +2
@RuinVS, im a fuckin fan not gonna lie, been reading your works ever since you started, love your works, and yeah i also thought that maybe it was the hypnosis, but turns out it was actually alleged incest, cuz the character was calling her "aunt maya" took me quite a while to explain that she isnt really her aunt aunt, and like they arent blood related or anything, it was a hassle, but it all got sorted so thanks!!!
Posted on 19 July 2024, 03:53 by:   Hawkx1    PM
Score +7
pg 91 seems out of order

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