Raw: /g/2975763/a54511cd23/

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remember, when your tomboyish lesbian partner getting too close with her male friend

fuck her in the infirmary

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those two exchange who is "in control" of each other at the drop of a headpat. Several times in a row, Cutest domination loss ever.

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Page 3:
"This is your real goal all along, isn't it...?" -> "This was your real goal all along, wasn't it...?" (matching tense with previous text)
"I don't know what you are talking about~?" -> I don't know what you are talking about~" (this isn't a question)
"blood vessles" -> "blood vessels"

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"You even went out of your way and wore such sexy pairs lingerie to school, didn't you?" -> "You even went out of your way and wore such sexy lingerie to school, didn't you?" ("pairs lingerie," even if it were "pairs of lingerie," is not a thing people say)
"But you still wore them mean that you're not opposed to this, right~?" -> "But you still wore them. That means that you're not opposed to this, right~?" (either break this into two sentences or reconstruct it to have proper grammar)

Page 5:
"But you didn't tell me anything aboutdoing at school though?" -> "But you didn't tell me anything about doing it at school though!" (You can probably keep this as a question for a specific kind of emphasis, but it's not necessary)

Page 6:
"How can you wear such a lewd pair of underwears..." -> "How can you wear such lewd underwear..." (this is referring to the bra and panties, which is not pluralized like that)

Page 7:
"So that is your true goal all along, huh?" -> "So that was your true goal all along, huh?" (This is not the tense one would use here)
"And ot even a single one of them see me as a girl so there's nothing for you to worry about." -> "And not even a single one of them sees me as a girl so there's nothing for you to worry about."
"There are a lot of arrogant and delusional filths that think..." -> "There are a lot of arrogant and delusional filth that think..." ("filths" should not be pluralized here)

Page 12:
"I was just imagining about that" -> either "I was just imagining that." or "I was just thinking about that."

Page 13:
"Making me wear some erotic lingeries..." -> "Making me wear erotic lingerie..."

Page 14:
"I've always been telling that to myself." -> "I've always been telling myself that." or "I've always been saying that to myself."

Page 15:
"Are these underwears look good on me?" -> "Does this underwear look good on me?"

Page 16:
"If everyone in the class see this all their jaws will drop to the floor for sure! -> "If everyone in the class saw this, all their jaws would drop to the floor for sure!" (Another tense issue)

Page 17:
"Who would have thought that the quiet and elegant honorary student..." -> pretty sure this should be "Who would have thought that the quiet and elegant honor student" (or honors student depending on your region)
"Is actually very possessive and love to do naughty things, right?" -> "Is actually very possessive and loves to do naughty things, right?" (tense again)
"I only love to do those stuffs because it's with you, Yukino!" -> "I only love to do this stuff because it's with you, Yukino!"

Page 20:
"I'm sorry for always being so jealousy..." -> "I'm sorry for always being so jealous..."

Page 21:
"I have a plan with someone else prior." -> "I have prior plans with someone else."
"Just tell me how the game is tomorrow is fine~" -> "Just tell me how the game is tomorrow, it's fine~" or "It's fine if you just tell me how the game is tomorrow~"
"Does that make you feel any more reassuring yet?" -> "Does that reassure you?"

Most of this is just grammar fixes, but this really does need another pass to smooth out how awkward and stilted it all feels.

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@murgilod thanks for the corrections, about the the lingerie part, I wasn't sure it was singular or plural so I just kinda winged it, but the rest of them were so bad, maybe I really should find a proofreader because I couldn't identify all these mistakes even after going through them twice.

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You ever wonder if the typical Japanese school nurse is bothered by the overwhelming scent of sex in the infirmary?

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Stop the cap...

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@0ld0neEye
Nope. Because the nurse is Always Out (tm)

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