nicee and thanks for the translate!

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"with her and hands"?
"towns girl"?
"the thug that said to her..."?
"...and starts dashing"?
"understand on why you"?
"there was was"?
"within in the town"
"so the cult usually ignored by the townsfolk"
"the person who just talking to"
"you are not the face person I've dealt"?
"both hers and the cultleader's semen"
"stabs her sword inside the cult leader's solider"

And there are numerous verb tense issues. Narration is supposed to be written in past tense.

Finally, the text is very rambly.

Dude, get a proofreader.

Last edited on 09 October 2024, 10:17.

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If you got such a problem with it, then translate it yourself, faggot.

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This account has been spamming shoddy translations for 2+ years at this point, I don't think he's going to get a proofreader. Unfortunately.

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