Update: Shinon -> Sinon and many other things

Maybe I'll do [Split] next (just maybe, GGO Sinon with no-face character is not really my type)

Thanks for the translation. Just a few points of correction.

Pg. 3, Lower-right: "I knew we could count on Sinon."
Pg. 4, Lower-right: "Not like we could help them even if we wanted to."
Pg. 7, Middle: "Hey, Sinon!"
Pg. 9, Middle: "is as much as I can take."
Pg. 12, Middle (box): "to do such naughty things."
Pg. 12, Middle (bubble): "My hips won't stop."
Pg. 14, Bottom: "The Harassment Prevention Code...?"
Pg. 15, Bottom: "Sinon?"

Again, thanks for the translation. "Sinon" seems to be the generally accepted version of her user name, whereas Shino is her actual name. Changing it to "Sinon" or leaving it as "Shinon" would be up to you.

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Ok, thank you, I'm not really familiar with SAO after ALO arc so I forgot that people call her by Sinon, I'll try fixing it whenever I can

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That mating press should have appeared on the anime to make Kirito more OP.

Anyways, some pages have really small text. The editor could make letters bigger and use white countour on the text so it stands out from the box, not needing to make it fit inside and focusing more on the readability.

It might be a crappy explanation, so just look it up on google or youtube and there should be some guides explaining this properly.

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@Kinights
Thank you for your suggestion, but this is actually just my personal interest. I used to do that method you mentioned in my older translations, but in time I found it really crappy and looked somewhat ugly so I tried my best to fit all of the text in the box. But yeah, you are right, I'm doing this for others to read so I should be focusing more on the readability rather than personal interest.

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Sinonon = best girl

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here is the Shino series order going by release date:

1st 2015-06-14 (SC2015 Summer) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Difference (Sword Art Online) /g/888395/3e97b70d73/ EHCOVE TL
2nd 2015-08-16 (C88) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Crack (Sword Art Online) /g/952737/be91027157/ EHCOVE TL
3rd 2015-12-31 (C89) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Split (Sword Art Online)/g/1079084/bc95bebfc3/ EHCOVE+葛の寺 TL
4th 2016-02-28 (SC2016 Winter) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Break off (Sword Art Online) /g/985179/8445258a5a/ doujins.com TL
5th 2016-05-01 (COMIC1☆10) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Envy (Sword Art Online) /g/1071317/d1e0d94a6b/ 葛の寺 TL
6th 2016-07-03 (SC2016 Summer) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Mount (Sword Art Online) /g/1071033/00be321ace/ [WE ARE HERE] 葛の寺 TL
7th 2016-08-14 (C90) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Case closed. (Sword Art Online) /g/1070515/b60e04967f/ 葛の寺 TL
8th 2016-09-18 (CT28) [Angyadow (Shikei)] Bonus track (Sword Art Online) /g/981012/7e60c9dd3a/ not translated yet

It is possible that the series is over since the circle newest SAO works are not about Shnio, but about Yuuki.

Last edited on 26 June 2017, 05:32 UTC.

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Why are these all being translated out of order

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I assume harassment prevention was added after the times Asuna was mercilessly fondled...

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