You can always get some unexpected suprises...

Kylie just met a nice guy in the bar, and they're spended a hot passionate night together...

Unfortunately at the next day Kylie found out that her new boyfriend is no other than the the infamous "Masked Death".
A "famous" serial killer who is responsible the death for more of 50 woman in the past 10 years.
And she is no other than just an another helpless victim in the Seral Killer's list.

Kylie's body was never found. She has becomed the new piece of the killer's trophy collection.

Now I'm curious what an expected surprize would look like. <.<

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Her last words:
"Damn you, One-Punch Man"
Thanks for sharing the comic.

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Or...

"Damn you Lex Luthor! Superman will catch you one day!" :)

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Profwilliam, was this the 'longer commission' from Linart? Or do you have another one in the work? It seems to be the same length as the previous one.

I would love to see Linart do a decapitation or dismemberment set... if I had the money I'd commission her for some work too.

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I'm currently ordering a longer commission.

The death of the redhead girl and this is a part of the same story. But currently only this is finished . The whole story will be much longer...

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are you telling me that there will be more with this chick and the red head? Perhaps dismemberment and decapitations? Yess??? LOL I hate seeing her in one piece.

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Exactly as you said! Tought the story only half ready, but there will be some necrophilia and dismembering at the end. So stay tunned... :)

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So more with this chick? We haven't seen her die yet . And the red head? Mmmm._. their limbless torsos would be quite a sight. Such nice and fit bodies are never supposed to remain intact. Lin has never done gore, plenty of vore though. I'm curious to see how she does blood and guts.

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She's so pringles

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Unexpected surprise featuring a bald man without haircut. Well, it's consistent.

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at first, i thought 'aang' and 'katara' (from avatar the last airbender)

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The original manga style was a bit better in my books. This style of drawing look uninteresting to me - to generic.

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well this is by a different artist not the one that did the manga style ones

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Yeah. This is a different artist who i commisisoned this story.

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The surprise was that he's bald.

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Damn it, monojungla, you stole my joke!

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So i'm confused, Do only the patrons get the slaughterhouse senes or will those be available to everyone eventually?

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i just posted parts of the story here and other sites. On the Patreon you can see the whole story, with extra parts + two other commissions.

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Does Saitama Luthor really need that hokey get-up?
I mean, I appreciate that the art here is about the best in this small niche, but it seems silly and reeks of power fantasy-ing. It also looks like Dr Doom.

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So basically we get no payoff unless we actually pay.

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Yeah i try to get this comic free until is possible but the commisison is really expensive. That's why i choose the Patreon.

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Just a waste of a story to be honest, will probably never be seen due to greed

If the artist who is doing this ever see's this comment, i want you to know you commited the greatest sin in art, selling out. you've taken a comic you've worked hard for and sacrificed your pride for greed. I hope your patreon gets taken down, and you never receive any money for your work from now on.

So many artists have patreons, shadman, karmagik and many more talented artists yet they don't tease people with short comics and than leave the real one for patrons only, if anything they do the opposite and have the short comic for patrons and the real one for everyone else.patrons are supposed to get small bonuses not everything while the rest get the scraps.

imagine if tomorrow karmagik announced from now on the american dream comic he's been working for is now only viewable by patrons,he would lose all his respect, and just be another sellout, and that's just what this artist is, a sellout. Don't support people who use patreon this way, support the people who give us the whole thing instead of just scraps.

if i do have this all wrong i am sorry i realize now this could be a breakdown in communication, since i assume profwilliam's first langauge is not english, he could mean he needs the patreon to finish the comic and the whole thing will be posted for everyone as soon as it's done, but he just needs more money to commission the pages. until he responds we won't know.

Last edited on 20 April 2018, 09:26 UTC.

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