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[TheBigBadWolf01] The Jackal's Curse Redux

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Posted:2018-07-17 13:45
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File Size:1.57 MB
Length:8 pages
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Posted on 17 July 2018, 17:02 UTC by:   IronHide77777    PM
Score +13
...Ok...The chain of events could have been choreographed to make a little more sense, where did the second Anubis come from, what is the significance of breaking the statue why did the glasses break in such a weird and unbelievable way instead of falling off? If it was from the power ora, then why where the cloths not torn off at the same time?

To many questions, not enough context.
Maybe I missed it, but I think things moved too fast for just 8 pages 12-14 at least could have allowed for context to be added between pages 1 and 2 and pages 5 and 6 and pages 7 and 8 I mean where did the Anubis go afterwards???
Posted on 17 July 2018, 20:53 UTC by:   Deiser    PM
Score +12
@Ironhide77777 You're thinking wayyyyyyy too hard about something that's pretty much tf smut.

The statue had the spirit of a jackal girl inside (hence why it went into him/her), which took him over. The male jackal appeared because smut. The glasses broke in an unbelievable way because the entire thing is freaking magic-based and thus you're applying realism to something that doesn't need it. The last pic is more fanservice. The end.
Posted on 18 July 2018, 03:58 UTC by:   MitchellTF    PM
Score +13
The problem is, pages 6 and 7 don't make SENSE with the rest...if you cut them out? You have a REALLY good, cohreant sequence. Well, for TF Fetish.
Posted on 18 July 2018, 04:54 UTC by:   rwpikul    PM
Score +28
Checking the postings on FA reveals that pages 6 and 7 were last minute additions by the commissioner. Although, "transformed into a jackal, Anubis uses as sexual plaything" is common enough to be a go-to assumption for what's going on.
Posted on 18 July 2018, 20:10 UTC by:   IronHide77777    PM
Score +7
Just because magic is involved, that is no reason to make it completely ridiculous.
It breaks the immersion when things that don't make sense and are just thrown in there.
Posted on 28 July 2018, 01:13 UTC by:   FlammabeMole    PM
Score +6
Just click on page 5, press back then click 8 if you want the story without the 'extra' scenes.

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