April is gone. She fed herself to the gulper, and got mushed up and digested. What little of her still exists (outside of gulper meat) consists of some high school girl sized bones in the soil surrounding the creature that ate her. But before that...

April led her best friend in the world out into the forest with promises of something amazing. Something that'd leave her speechless! She told her about the gulper. At least, partially. She told her about all sorts of girls that let the gulper swallow them, only to come back up soon after, and how cool it felt! Of course, April isn't telling the whole truth. Sure, there have been girls that were swallowed up by this gulper, but not one of them have come out... Lauren eventually learns the truth. Unfortunately for her, she's more than halfway inside by the time she does, and once your hips are gulped up, there's nowhere for you to go but deeper....

Put the right tags on it. If it's snuff it should have the tag for it.

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???what happen

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SHE KNEW HER PLACE!

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except this aint snuff, its vore.

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Good to see more of your work Coinflip

Loved it <3

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Snuff isn't mutually exclusive with Vore. The death aspect is played up heavily by the narration, so I'd say Snuff is an appropriate tag.

Either way, I love these vore sequences where there's another person in the wings reacting to what's going on as well.

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Keep up the good work! And snuff isn't always a explosion of guts but more of the aspect of death, isn't it? I'd say it should have the tag all in all.

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Yeah, guts is more guro than snuff (though the two obviously overlap). Fatal vore, especially something as deliciously callous as this, is definitely snuff and vore (but without visible digestion, not guro).

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I have to agree with the people saying its snuff, and I readded the tag. Its definitely meant to imply death (although not show it explicitly), but I wasn't sure if it should be added because I didn't know if it was considered implied with vore.

I definitely appreciate the feedback, and hopefully it didn't bother anyone that didn't expect it. More importantly though, I hope people enjoyed it! @LovetoVore Im glad you did!! <3

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hope to see more from you soon
great work

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