Translated by: (FF77/ Lance)

Not your usual hypnosis story...
P-San later found out he contracted several STDs...
pg.23-24 with Chihiro-Sama is something we need more...

Last edited on 26 September 2018, 05:40 UTC.

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pg. 20 I don't feel so good

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How do you mess up translating a character's name when it's written out on the cover in English for you

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@AlphaSquadron

IKR? Last time it was "Shinden Minami", now it's "Arata Minami".

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Reading "Arata-chan" throughout the whole thing was torturous. I feel like even a cursory QC glance at the im@s wiki "Oh, that's Nitta Minami, check" would've taken maybe 15 seconds, but hey, it happens.

Other than that, the doujin itself was good, of course

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My fucking sides. I think this is one of the only stories where the hypnotized wins against the hypnotizer. Especially even without sex.

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"I tried to use hypnotism to rape this girl, but then I was appalled - APPALLED - to learn that she'd had sex with multiple previous partners. She wasn't pure! Not like me, a mind-controlling rapist."

okay dude your hang-ups are your own

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Yeah, his first mistake was viewing a woman as anything more than a sack of warm flesh.

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