This is not a translation! It is an edit of the text file I have called [Dolcett] Karyn’s Cookout (In Color), which is an edit of the original Dolcett story inspired by Karyn.
Did translate the Chinese but only so I could add the right text. moved the speech bubbles tails around and sometimes the bubbles to make them conform with western conventions.
As for the names they are based on Google images of individuals that match the characters.
This story is a modification of the text and graphics files,
[Dolcett] Karyn's Cookout (Color) /g/949108/805b79aa9d/ and
小彤的户外烧烤 /g/1324264/c54510fd3b/

Last edited on 05 February 2019, 04:47 UTC.

Base +9, roadkillfish -4

Pretty good stuff, both the original work and your edit.

Base +5