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(C96) [Kamagabuchi (Hatanaka)] Suguha to Oji-san (Sword Art Online) [English] [Gagak_Ireng]

(C96) [かまがぶち (畑中)] 直葉とおじさん (ソードアート・オンライン) [英訳]

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Posted:2020-01-09 09:50
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:18.20 MB
Length:19 pages
Favorited:644 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.51

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Posted on 09 January 2020, 11:43 UTC by:   Resonae    PM
Score +128
Why have you made a half-assed attempt at rewriting this into impregnation?
Posted on 09 January 2020, 13:08 UTC by:   Red_Piotrus    PM
Score +127
@Resonae: Why do you call it a rewrite? We need examples of texthanged for this to be tagged/renamed
Posted on 09 January 2020, 16:31 UTC by:   Juggernaut Santa    PM
Score +29
To be fair, the raw doesn't have the tag. So one between the raw and this is incorrectly tagged.
Posted on 09 January 2020, 19:42 UTC by:   peace9001    PM
Score +122
As far as I checked it's not a rewrite for the most part but there's some extra focus on impregnation added that wasn't in the original. Some examples:
page 16: original "watashi mo" (me too) was translated as "do it inside"
page 17: original "...un" (...yeah) was translated as "...yeah, oji-san's seed"
Posted on 09 January 2020, 19:44 UTC by:   bonzaimonkey    PM
Score +153
Agree with Resonae.

Page 5, he mentions, "Suguha-chan, You're proactive today?".
Her response in the raw is "Yeah, when I wear these clothes..." and the translation says "Actually, today is my da-" implying it's her dangerous day.
Bottom left says "W-what? What is it?"

Page 6, in the raw she says "It's fine!"

Page 8, bottom left should read "Let's do it here too, okay?"

Page 16, translation says "Do it inside", raw reads "M-me too!" (Responding to him saying he's about to cum".

Page 17, translator added tiny text about seed. Doesn't appear in raw.
Posted on 10 January 2020, 01:19 UTC by:   svines85    PM
Score +40
Suguha is such a whore.......good for her :D

Very nice, thanks for all the effort and sharing, good work :)
Posted on 10 January 2020, 04:13 UTC by:   yakoyami    PM
Score +6
Should be reclassified.
Posted on 10 January 2020, 16:17 UTC by:   zellkaiser    PM
Score +10
This uploader doesn't even know how to put his uploads to the other language category... even if you exclude all languages but jap, his will still come up on the list.
Last edited on 11 January 2020, 11:16 UTC.
Posted on 17 January 2020, 01:19 UTC by:   wjxxhulka66n6    PM
Score +20
How is this NTR? Is she fucking her brother in the anime or books? I thought the Asuna one won.

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