thanks for the hard work! an okay job for a first-timer. there's room for improvements however.
from a quick glance: the font size and line spacing is too big. you don't need to try to fit the entire bubble. also, minor grammar errors and typos all around. basically small things that can make the reading experience much better.
it's a good practice to proofread by yourself before uploading. if you don't have time then try to find a proofreader. keep it going, and many thanks!