My first attempt at a translation EVER
(mostly with the help of google translate)

I skipped to this chapter,
because I was interested,
what the deal with the brother was
and because I was afraid,
that real translators would catch up,
if I was too slow

Like
Just make it
Into a haiku.

Base +6, Feladrance +6, ubantos +7, disngua1 +8, -XeoN- +6, sleazeball +3, bientaimon +11, sunshineandlolipops +27, PoPoPanda +6, Divine_Intervention +12, agittainh +7, Zeroshiki~ +7, CasualClown +6

And here we are .... once again ..... at please use at least some comic fonts for editing. Worldwide every year thousands of comics get lettered using comic fonts for one simple reason: They look good by using comic fonts.
No Windows PC ever came out of store equiped with the fonts you need to typeset a comic or manga and I assume it's not different for Macs.

Before you continue your translation adventure you definitely need to download some comic fonts like: Komika, Wurmics Bravo, Wurper Comics or Anime Ace.You can download them fro free on sites like
dafont.com or you can browse through the free section of blambot.com.

Next step read a typesetting tutorial like https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main

It's not the worst MTL I've seen, so you probably spend some time for cleaning it up. Instead of google you can also try deepl.com (but careful it doesn't know all porn vocabulary you might need, like smega) but the grammar is a lot of times better / more natural than google.

Nearly forgot: Sorry to say that, but your "Hey, I made a shit translation, can a good translator please make a better one" plan, will mostlikely not work. They will just see it's already translated and pass on to another from work their huge piles of mangas they would like to translate.

Base +17, JukanX +25, HeavHo +12, sleazeball +3, Vilis +26, funk_u_up +13, Vagic +6, IllHaveaNickname +11, GearZeroSky +19, abehj +6, adfgrtgsdfgsfd +6, agittainh +7, Darklock +9, and 5 more...

better translated than not translated. thx

Base +6, funk_u_up -13, slayeranime +11, Divine_Intervention +12, tsundere1ftw -7, massa -10, StatisticallyNP -10, occo +7, Mochita +6

i loved your last page gag notes

Base +8, strus +8, illegalcheese +9, occo +7, Shurikn +6, darklord1235 +9, tails_ +6

Some hardcore trap work by Oyster would be nice. If he was testing the waters with this, then I hope the reception was good 'cause I'd like to see some more.
Outside of this and Delta9 I don't see much hardcore trap stuff like this.

Base +8, occo +7, Mochita -6

chapters 3-9 here: /g/1877406/f68536b1cb/

Base +2

>mostly with the help of google translate
tagging rtl (uploader comment)

Base +39