Yay no weird humiliation stuff.

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I won't complain about the rating it recieves. It is what it is. I just decided to purchase and upload the full set since nobody else was, and it's been a long time and other full sets came out. Just figured I'd make someones day, maybe.

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Thoughts on the typesetting aside, it's not unreadable but the grammar issues, particularly the tense difficulties and misused phrases ("to enter 3 cocks each", etc.) weigh it down a lot. It's a good upload even still, IMO, but the translation definitely needs a pro editing pass.

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@enrlich I think it's cause Mona is drawn ugly. I love oppai and thighs like every other person but the way it's drawn is too much.
The whole slime pregnancy gimp whatever stuff is also kinda a turn off.

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Sometimes, I consider trying to correct grammar to the closest possible to the original context myself. But I decided not to. I have the psd file, but recreating the scenes would be too much work for me right now.

@Primus de Pedos

Also, I can see that; the gimp being a bit much. I understand.

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这该叫k记还是叫村长过来

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这不好看吗！？

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transforming into a slime of sorts is all well and neat, but i cannot stand that blowjob face.

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Call it wishful thinking, I just hope there's a sequel where Mona ends up with the traveler and just... y'know, fuck a bunch?

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