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[581] Cool Bishoujo Remodeling Ch12・Program Bug Edition [English]

[581]【12】クール美少女改造・プログラムバグ編 [英訳]

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Posted:2021-08-01 09:10
Parent:1964397
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Language:English  TR
File Size:11.06 MiB
Length:8 pages
Favorited:385 times
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Posted on 01 August 2021, 09:10 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
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The artist's pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/49287
The artist's skeb: https://skeb.jp/@hokan185
Original work: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/91184176

Please support the artist (581(ごはい)) if you can. This is also requested by けー. Please support him too. https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/1133210

I used DeepL etc. to translate this while making sure it is coherent and keeping to the original work. Please, if there's any corrections I need to make, tell me and I'll verify and change it. page 6, 機体 would translate as aircraft/fuselage but that made no sense. separately, they would be "machine body" but I had it as device on chapter 2. page 7, 処理 had processing/treatment/dealing with. treatment was already used for a different word "処置".

2021-08-01 Edit: I changed "device" to "machine body" for consistency in page 6.

Chapter 1-4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Posted on 21 July 2021, 08:54 by:   AhKai    PM
Score +22
How horrifying
Posted on 21 July 2021, 13:57 by:   sectorunit888    PM
Score +40
Looks like we'll get another addition to the sexaroid crew
Posted on 21 July 2021, 17:27 by:   Ghalen    PM
Score +6
I get the feeling there are a lot more witness with where it inplys they are...
Posted on 22 July 2021, 08:06 by:   shemiar    PM
Score +6
I have to praise the "machine body" translation. How smart and (amazingly) correct.
Posted on 22 July 2021, 08:36 by:   VermillionFox162    PM
Score +11
@shemiar

I'll give it a try then. Chapter 2 has it as well so I'll change that too. I don't want the website to treat the reuploads as spam so I'll wait a bit.

I have also seen 3 words that mean the same thing but have slightly different meanings:
終了 I used finished
完成 I used complete
完了 I used completed

I couldn't think of any other words and I didn't like the word "done" and none of the thesauruses gave me anything that fit. Any suggestions are encouraged.
Posted on 27 July 2021, 18:12 by:   Stem Cell    PM
Score +10
Thank you so much for working on these :)
Posted on 01 August 2021, 17:59 by:   Loki The Flameshield    PM
Score +7
She saw too much.
Posted on 26 May 2024, 21:44 by:   rsx205    PM
Score +39
>I used DeepL etc
tagging rtl (uploader comment)

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