Please get a proofreader. The translation doesn't make sense at least some of the time, and that was with just trying to enjoy the read.
Notable examples: pg 1 first panel: FUTAYO IS CHALLENGES THE KOBOLD CREATURES TO "SEX", THEY ARE NOT BEING FULLY AWARE OF WHAT IT IS... pg 1 third panel: FEEL LIKE YOU ALL ARE READY FOR IT HUH... pg 2 first panel: IT HURT... pg 2 fifth panel: DON'T NEED TO RUSH...
Then the all caps is another thing, as with the "..." usage when it's not something needed.