https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/23673926
https://twitter.com/arch_nin
https://arch-nin.gumroad.com/

Based on the doujin game: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ239186.html

As much as I like the content, this is clearly not in English, but "English".

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What was the point in having me edit the English script if arch_nin never bothered to use it?

Edit: @sonnytag123 It could be the difference between the free and paid versions.

Last edited on 28 February 2022, 01:49.

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@nighthound62 maybe cause this guy is not arch_nin and he grabbed the earlier version ?

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Tag "male:kissing" means that ONLY MALES ARE KISSING IN THE SCENE.

For any kind of male kissing a non-male situation, only "female:kissing" should be used.

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Nice. The story and text is faithful to the original game, and never have I thought I will be able to see a doujin based on a small game.

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@nighthound62 It seems that arch_nin never actually put your edited versions on Pixiv and only posted them to his twitter. Uploader probably didn't bother checking the post description for the better version.

Edit: grabbed it and uploaded it myself: /g/2154276/44d3566082/

Last edited on 28 February 2022, 09:18.

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i have played the game，it's excellent ！

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