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I'd suggest not working with mixed-case fonts if you PR can't pick up punctuational and grammatical mistakes. Also just general punctuation and grammar issues like inconsistent capitalization and missing/added periods.

pg 1.

Oh,hi... > Oh, hi...

pg 2.

And now I work at one of my relative's old apartment as a caretaker... > And now I work at one of my relative's old apartments as a caretaker...

Not much going on, and I have no particular dreams or goals in mind... > Not much goes on. I don't have any particular dreams or goals in mind (sounds really awkward).

pg 3.

You can tell that she's not the type of lady who lives in a run-down apartment like mine. > You can tell that she's not the type of lady to live in a run-down apartment like mine.

pg 4.

Now I just work doing outsource programming on the side. > Now I just work as an outsourced programmer on the side.

pg 7.

Please don't think of me as if I'm a slut. > Please don't think of me as a slut.

pg 8.

How long has my dick's been erect? > How long has my dick been erect?

pg 10.

It feels just like how I'd imagine it...! > It feels just like how I imagined it would...!

Maria-san's soft, supple, and white breasts wrapping around my dick... > Maria-san's soft, supply, white breasts wrapping around my dick...

pg 12.

It's the first time...I can feel such hard cock reaching deep inside me. > It's the first time...I've felt such a hard cock reach so deep inside me. (this whole sentence is awkward but at least now it's grammatically correct)

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misleading thumbnail lol was expecting lolicon

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wow, way to ruin a nice story by making the woman a conniving cunt.

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Now I ain't sayin' she a gold digger...

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@xmanzero At least she is tricking him because she likes him and wants him, and not for his money or free rent, and from the way the daughter seems, I would understand why.

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@cookiey: nope, I think her is the professional god digger. She told her child do not mess this time that's mean there are more people are lured by her

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@dark-wings: nope they already explained she doesnt need money, she just seduces someone when she likes it, the daughter is just messes if she doesnt like him

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